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« Reply #30 on: May 05, 2012, 03:35:49 PM »

sorry i can't put up cap 5 now, but i'll try and put it up later on today  Undecided
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« Reply #31 on: May 05, 2012, 04:51:44 PM »

it's here!)
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 Daggrabe stared at the body of Ratwrath, the head lying  on the ground. he look at the Warlord wicked smile and babbled like a brook “ow, lard! I wasin’ trying to slay ye, i swear it’ on me loath, sir!! Tiws all Ratwraths idey! Ow, lord please dot’ slay me, I beg ya!”
Wellcane winked at Daggrabe “now there matey, no more blabbing, I an’t gonna slay ya.”
Daggrabe look blankly at the warlord “ya an’t…lord??”
Wellcane nodded “ney,…I’m gonna skin ya!” he said wolfishly 
Degrade let out a agonized  wail  and went on his knees “aaaaa!  Lord please, don’ skin me!! I’ll do what ever you want, just please don’t skin me!!!!!!!!!”
But the Warlord had no mercy  Shocked
                                                           *
Farris and Rigon worked  at cutting wood blocks that were piled high  next to the abbey building Farris wiped his head fur “I think that enough, right Rigon?”
Rigontoson nodded “aye, anymore and we’ll have wood for supper!”
Farris smiled “right matey, that’s get this wood to the kitchens  for friar Thomas.”
He and Rigon took all of the wood to the kitchens, and knock on the wooden doors
A old mole wife  opened the doors “burr e that bis yung farrsey and rigen, how ares yum two??”
Farris smiled at her “fine, marm, just fine, we have some wood for the ovens, marm.”
The old mole nodded “burr in then yum gentle beast come un in.”
                                                         *
the sun shone hard on the head of Corin, who, inspect of the sun  watched Redwall tirelessly, his handsome face set in a tight frown. A nit landed on Corin’s ear, he didn’t even bet a eye lead  as the nit bit him,
He murmured to himself “two days, and nothing…I’ll have to leave here, if Farris doesn’t decide soon, I’m not even supposed to be here…”he sigh “maybe I’ll leave here…farris looks like his fine there…” he blinked a little “..without me.”
                                                     *
Wellcane walked away from the lifeless body of Daggrabe he turn to the seer “get that  useless thing out of my site, and get me some vittles well your at it.”
The Warlord smiled to himself, things were going the way he’d planed them…soon he’d march to mossflower woods
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« Reply #32 on: May 05, 2012, 09:14:43 PM »

well, what do you think??
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« Reply #33 on: May 06, 2012, 12:30:36 AM »

Ambiguous! Shocked Shocked Shocked I can't help wondering what's going to happen.
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I can see a new dawning, filling you with love,
The grass waves by, and the trees say hi.
The sun is dancing above.
I will never stop driving,
Down to Tennesse,
Come somehow I know,
You'll be there,
Waving back at me.
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« Reply #34 on: May 06, 2012, 12:47:40 AM »

XDD me too  Grin )
Ambiguous! Shocked Shocked Shocked I can't help wondering what's going to happen.
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« Reply #35 on: May 06, 2012, 08:52:34 PM »

good story captain  Grin
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« Reply #36 on: May 07, 2012, 04:56:24 PM »

thanks! Cheesy  Lips sealed i haven't even started cap 6 though...i'll start it now...
good story captain  Grin
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« Reply #37 on: May 14, 2012, 06:41:50 PM »

*coughs* i know, i know i should have started cap 6 a looooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnngggggg time ago...but i didn't..so i'll start today..that's all old chaps wot,wot! }
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« Reply #38 on: May 28, 2012, 12:52:24 PM »

Captain's not around much anymore. I hope he's writing his story and going to post soon
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« Reply #39 on: May 28, 2012, 10:02:28 PM »

She will, don't worry.  Wink
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I can see a new dawning, filling you with love,
The grass waves by, and the trees say hi.
The sun is dancing above.
I will never stop driving,
Down to Tennesse,
Come somehow I know,
You'll be there,
Waving back at me.
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« Reply #40 on: May 29, 2012, 10:29:15 PM »

He will, don't worry.  Wink
*cough* he will write more yes...but i'm a girl...and i can't write much because a virus got on my PC (this is my older sisters laptop) and yeah :/ sorry people, she said she'll fix my pc in a day or two..really sorry..  Undecided  Lips sealed  Cry
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« Reply #41 on: May 31, 2012, 07:52:11 PM »

Oh. Sorry. I modified it.
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I can see a new dawning, filling you with love,
The grass waves by, and the trees say hi.
The sun is dancing above.
I will never stop driving,
Down to Tennesse,
Come somehow I know,
You'll be there,
Waving back at me.
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« Reply #42 on: June 03, 2012, 12:12:27 AM »

LOL It's okay  Grin
Oh. Sorry. I modified it.
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« Reply #43 on: June 19, 2012, 06:33:29 PM »

right! my pc's fixed to i shall write more corin in a day!!! also i'm making a new book,so if you guys want to read it, say so and i'll make a topic for it!!  Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin
~the all-new, hyper cap'n
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« Reply #44 on: June 19, 2012, 08:31:26 PM »

Yes! Finally.
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I can see a new dawning, filling you with love,
The grass waves by, and the trees say hi.
The sun is dancing above.
I will never stop driving,
Down to Tennesse,
Come somehow I know,
You'll be there,
Waving back at me.
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