Good Vs. Evil Series Discussion Topic

[Redwaller]

Here I will post information on the series. Feel free to post your opinion, it can be critical, I don't mind, I just want it to be better. If you find grammatical errors, point them out here. If you have ideas, post them here.

The books:

From Fort to Abbey

Arch Nemesis(upcoming)

Poems featured in the books:

'The voice of the dead is ringing,
And you are the one to hear it,
Beware the warning,
For the candles of Death have been lit.
The shell and the bone you must shake,
And a decision you must make,
Choose the right path,
Or face the hero's wrath.
The righteous will fall,
If you destroy the red wall,
The sea will issue its plea,
And one will have to flee.'

[Redwaller]

This post will be  where I'll post pictures of the characters and stuff.

Dranfor Rofnard:

By Osu:


By cregga rose eyes:


By Romsca:


By Rainshadow:


By Rainshadow(Dibbun version):


By PluggFiretail:


By Jetthebinturong:


By Winifred:


By Leatho Shellhound:


Rofnard's Axe, by Danflorreguba:


Rofnard looking down from his balcony in Fort Blood, by Leatho Shellhound:


Kreastle:

By cregga rose eyes:


By Leatho Shellhound:


Danjosal:

By cregga rose eyes:


By Leatho Shellhound:


By Romsca:


Maximus the Ranger:

By cregga rose eyes:


By Romsca:


By Leatho Shellhound:


Deathtail:

By Leatho Shellhound:


Grimmer:

By Leatho Shellhound:


Geronimo:

By Leatho Shellhound:


Timbalisto:

By Leatho Shellhound:


By Romsca:


Flurseus:

By Leatho Shellhound:


Garrtail:

By Leatho Shellhound:


By Romsca:


Garner:

By Leatho Shellhound:


Sister Amabel Florence:

By Leatho Shellhound:


By Romsca:


Cover of the first book, by Leatho Shellhound:



The pictures of the chapters, by Leatho Shellhound:

[Leatho Shellhound]

It's a good story line, can't wait for more. 

[Redwaller]

I've modified the first chapter.

[TrevZ]

^Cool!

[Redwaller]

Thanks! 

Also, if anyone has questions, ask them here.

[Redwaller]

I've put the link to the first book in the first post.

[Redwaller]

I've added some new pics.

[Leatho Shellhound]

Nice!

[Redwaller]

A new picture of Maximus has been added.

[Leatho Shellhound]

Looks good, Are you going to write more any time soon?

[Romsca]

Wow, I just looked at this for the first time and it is AWESOME! 

[Redwaller]

Thanks! 

[Redwaller]

I'll be renaming the series and books names. For the Series name, how does this sound? The Life of the Warrior? Or The Life of a Warrior

[Leatho Shellhound]

I have a few Q's here.

1: Is Flurseus the Nighthaunter?
2: quote "He then turned to the wall and took the sword down" Where did you write about that sword and what sword is it?
3: Chapter 1 on the third post here http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=2059.0 looks longer than Chapter 1 in the first post.
4: When are you writing more, I can't wait!

I hope you do NOT see my Q's as a negative respons, I like your fanfic.