Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)

Romsca · January 21, 2013, 03:04:09 PM

Please post here any comments, constructive criticism, or feedback you may have on my story. Thanks! My story is found here.

Leatho Shellhound · January 21, 2013, 06:20:21 PM

Your story is fantastic!

Romsca · January 21, 2013, 06:44:12 PM

Thanks!

Kitsune · January 21, 2013, 07:57:21 PM

It's great!

Mattio · January 21, 2013, 08:33:23 PM

Its very good

Romsca · February 10, 2013, 04:05:13 PM

I just posted the start of chapter two!

Leatho Shellhound · February 10, 2013, 07:19:18 PM

Cool!

Romsca · February 15, 2013, 10:30:52 PM

The trap mentioned at the new paragraph in chapter two would be like a modern bear trap (think the Fox and the Hound)

Leatho Shellhound · February 15, 2013, 10:42:30 PM

Awesome!

Romsca · February 18, 2013, 03:02:55 AM

Announcement: I've completed chapter two!

Leatho Shellhound · February 18, 2013, 03:56:26 AM

Great!

cregga rose eyes · February 18, 2013, 04:32:05 PM

It is really great!

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