Song for "Holt Arundell"

[KitrallStreamrippler]

So, I'm writing a fan fiction, but I will probably develop it a little more before posting it here. However, I would lie some input on my poetry. In the beginning, one of the main characters is traveling through Mossflower Woods, and she sings this:

I woke this morn unto a sight,
The sun was beamin' bright.
The trees so green;
I've never seen
A lovelier springtime sight!

I woke this morn unto a sound:
The larksong all around.
The singing birds;
I've never heard
A lovelier springtime sound!

I woke this morn unto a smell
Of flowers in the dell.
What joy I felt;
I've never smelt
A lovelier springtime smell.

I'll sing hurrah, I'll sing hooray!
The winter's gone away.
So sing it out,
Or cheer and shout:
The springtime's here today!

Originally, I had just the first verse, as I'm usually not much of a poet. But then I had a tune, and I also wanted to expand the song to appeal to more senses than just sight... Comments (especially constructive criticism) are welcome.

Edit: I've decided to go ahead and start posting my story here. I'll start it in a new topic. (Please bear with me at the beginning, I think it gets better as it goes on. And my apologies for the accents. I did my best.)

[Mattio]

Great job it's great

[KitrallStreamrippler]

Thanks. I just hope that any other poems, songs or riddles will turn out as well as this did. (Especially riddles. I love them, but I've always been awful at solving them. Dunno if I could actually make one up...)