Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback

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AnnaofRedwall

June 12, 2013, 07:10:03 PM
I'd really like it if you've read the story I'm writing if you could give me some pointers and such here! Thanks a ton. :)
~AnnaofRedwall

PS: this should be the link to the actual story, I think http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=4171.msg193723#msg193723
I hate it when a package says 'easy open' and you need a scissors, a knife, a crowbar, a gun, and a light-saber to open it.

KitrallStreamrippler

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June 12, 2013, 07:46:20 PM
I love it! You have a very intriguing style. Keep the good work, Anna!
A day may come when the courage of men fails, when we forsake our friends and break all bonds of fellowship, but it is not this day. An hour of woes and shattered shields, when the age of men comes crashing down! But it is not this day! This day we fight!

rachel25

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June 15, 2013, 03:06:54 PM
I've only read the Prolouge and it reminds me a bit of Elaila  ;) but it's nicely written I will be reading some more I'm just a bit busy at the moment  ;D

AnnaofRedwall

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June 16, 2013, 08:53:34 PM
of all the story, i like the prolouge best!
I hate it when a package says 'easy open' and you need a scissors, a knife, a crowbar, a gun, and a light-saber to open it.

AnnaofRedwall

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June 25, 2013, 03:15:40 AM
when i wrote that part my creative juices were really flowing...  ;D
I hate it when a package says 'easy open' and you need a scissors, a knife, a crowbar, a gun, and a light-saber to open it.

AnnaofRedwall

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July 14, 2013, 12:19:42 AM
thanks a TON!!!!!!!!!!
I hate it when a package says 'easy open' and you need a scissors, a knife, a crowbar, a gun, and a light-saber to open it.
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