Faiyloes Riddles and Rhymes.

[Faiyloe]

I wrote some riddles and poems based off of Redwall and I wanted to share them with you so here it goes. feel free to tell me what you think.

Riddles

Riddle 1

They said I stole they were mistaken.
I always returned what I had taken.
Keeping very careful record,
To make sure everything was restored,
Back to where it was before,
And then I'd go and take some more.




Riddle 2

Two names, two me's,
Two identities.
Friendly to the friends I chose,
To foes a friendly ruse.
Many Tricks I can do,
A magic show just for you. 
Life's a stage an act a show,
that's the way things should go.
Can you guess give a try 
Please tell me who am I.

The answers to the Riddles are characters from the books. PM me if you think you know who they are.

Rhymes
   
Blackout
Pain seething, 
Struggled breathing,
Vision blurring,
Thoughts whirring,
Head spinning,
Your falling,
Friends calling,
Now nothing.

Bloodrath
They attack,
You fight back,
Comrades dead,
Seeing red,
You fight on,
Till deed is done,
And you have won,
When all the vermin have fled and gone.

Ok I know those where a little morbid but I was just reading Dusktail the Fan Fiction and they were kind of inspired by all of the awesome dreams in it.

[Tam and Martin]

Nice!

[The Shade]

These are pretty good! 

[Redwaller]

Cool!

[rachel25]

I like  and I think I know who the first riddle is about

[Cornflower MM]

I wrote some riddles and poems based off of Redwall and I wanted to share them with you so here it goes. feel free to tell me what you think.

Riddles

Riddle 1

They said I stole they were mistaken.
I always returned what I had taken.
Keeping very careful record,
To make sure everything was restored,
Back to where it was before,
And then I'd go and take some more.




Riddle 2

Two names, two me's,
Two identities.
Friendly to the friends I chose,
To foes a friendly ruse.
Many Tricks I can do,
A magic show just for you. 
Life's a stage an act a show,
that's the way things should go.
Can you guess give a try 
Please tell me who am I.

The answers to the Riddles are characters from the books. PM me if you think you know who they are.

Rhymes
   
Blackout
Pain seething, 
Struggled breathing,
Vision blurring,
Thoughts whirring,
Head spinning,
Your falling,
Friends calling,
Now nothing.

Bloodrath
They attack,
You fight back,
Comrades dead,
Seeing red,
You fight on,
Till deed is done,
And you have won,
When all the vermin have fled and gone.

isn't the first riddle about Orkwil Prink?? from Eulalia??

Ok I know those where a little morbid but I was just reading Dusktail the Fan Fiction and they were kind of inspired by all of the awesome dreams in it.

[rachel25]

I guessed right! But I won't say who the first riddle is about because that would ruin it for other people but   *derp face*

[Faiyloe]

Rachel it's guessed not guest.

[Tam and Martin]

I guest right! But I won't say who the first riddle is about because that would ruin it for other people but  *derp face*

I guessed both of them right!

[The Shade]

Well, the first one I got fairly easily...the second one? Hmm, a little bit harder. There are several beasts who would fit the description. Hmmm...

[rachel25]

Rachel it's guessed not guest.

whoops! Brain bleep     

[Faiyloe]

That's Ok I do stuff like that all the time.

[rachel25]

Yeah 

[Leatho Shellhound]

Well, the first one I got fairly easily...the second one? Hmm, a little bit harder. There are several beasts who would fit the description. Hmmm...

I got the second one right.

[Gonff the Mousethief]

I got them all wrong