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Started by Wylder Treejumper, April 03, 2014, 08:52:42 PM

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Wylder Treejumper

April 03, 2014, 08:52:42 PM
Please post your thoughts on my Redwall tribute fanfic here, not in the story.
"'Tis the business of small minds to shrink, but he whose heart is firm, and whose conscience approves his conduct, will pursue his principles unto death."
-Thomas Paine

"Integrity and firmness is all I can promise; these, be the voyage long or short, shall never forsake me although I may be deserted by all men."
-George Washington

Courage: Not only the willingness to die manfully, but also the determination to live decently.

Osu

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April 20, 2014, 05:12:31 AM Last Edit: April 20, 2014, 05:14:09 AM by Osu
I think it shows a lot of promise! There aren't enough stories with canon characters in them, haha. I think you've got Mhera's personality spot-on, too. Good on you, I've always thought it's very difficult to keep characters in-character. I'm definitely interested in seeing where you take this!

On a side note, I would recommend linking this thread in the OP of your story thread. It would make it easier for your readers to find the right place to share reviews and general commentary on your story. :)
Redwall is always open, its tables laden, to you and any of good heart.

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