A Summer of Twisted Fates: Link in the post.

[Lady Ashenwyte]

So, I am in the process of writing a fanfiction, and I have decided to share it here. Since the content it it is mature, the content will never be on the forums.

Warning, the story contains mature content. Do not view if you are young or do not wish to view such content.

Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11231632/1/A-Summer-of-Twisted-Fates-Book-One-The-Die-is-Cast-or-Shadow-and-Sea

[Skyblade]

Very nice and interesting.

I'm honestly a bit confused about what's happening in the excerpt, but maybe that's what you meant to do.

Anyway, you've got a good idea. Personally, the chapter was too short for my (verbose) tastes, but you might edit it to make it longer anyway.