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Fan Works => Fan Fiction => Topic started by: Tam and Martin on January 04, 2014, 04:32:39 AM

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Question: Should I put it up?
Option 1: Yes votes: 9
Option 2: No votes: 0
Option 3: I don't Care votes: 2
Title: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on January 04, 2014, 04:32:39 AM
I was wondering if you guys think I should post a story I wrote when I was ten years old on here. It is a Redwall story that I made up. Since I was ten when I wrote it there are probably a lot of misspellings, grammar problems and sometimes a boring storyline but, would you guys like to hear it?

Hear is the topic for my story: ]http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=5649.msg267163#msg267163] (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=5649.msg267163#msg267163)
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Gonff the Mousethief on January 04, 2014, 09:56:10 PM
sure
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Osu on January 04, 2014, 11:30:12 PM
Yes, of course. Sharing is caring, after all~ ;D
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Tam and Martin on January 05, 2014, 04:44:24 PM
Quote from: Osu on January 04, 2014, 11:30:12 PM
Yes, of course. Sharing is caring, after all~ ;D
Thanks! I will see about it.
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Tam and Martin on January 16, 2014, 02:22:55 PM
 I need more people to want to hear this if I'm gonna put it up....
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: The Skarzs on January 16, 2014, 04:47:58 PM
Put it up! Put it up!

Read my fanfic!

Eat food!

Put your story up!!!
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Tam and Martin on January 17, 2014, 02:51:12 PM
What is the name of your fic?
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: The Skarzs on January 17, 2014, 06:37:10 PM
Mossflower falls.  :)

Are you going to put up your story? I'll definitely read it.
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Tam and Martin on January 18, 2014, 01:55:14 AM
I'll read yours! And yes I might put mine up soon  ;D
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Shadefur nightblade on January 18, 2014, 03:01:33 AM
put it up!!! ;D
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Gnoflet on January 20, 2014, 02:19:03 AM
I think you should put it up.
Title: Re: My Story.
Post by: Tam and Martin on January 22, 2014, 07:27:58 PM
Alright! I'll put it up! Look for the topic for it here: http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=5649.msg267163#msg267163 (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=5649.msg267163#msg267163)

Thanks!
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: The Skarzs on January 22, 2014, 09:38:42 PM
The prologue is very good; Can't wait for the first chapter!
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Osu on January 23, 2014, 01:28:36 AM
Ah, good introduction -- straightforward, and lays out our (alleged?) hero's background without wandering. It looks to me like you've got an interesting premise. I'm interested to see where you go with it!
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on January 24, 2014, 03:13:27 PM
Quote from: Osu on January 23, 2014, 01:28:36 AM
Ah, good introduction -- straightforward, and lays out our (alleged?) hero's background without wandering. It looks to me like you've got an interesting premise. I'm interested to see where you go with it!
Thank you both! That was a flashback for one of the main characters of the story. Actually I forget what chapter one was about because I wrote it so long ago  :P

CHAPTER ONE IS UP!
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: The Skarzs on January 27, 2014, 12:43:17 AM
I read it; Keep going! ;D
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on January 27, 2014, 01:16:36 AM
Thank you for reading!
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Gnoflet on February 12, 2014, 10:58:34 PM
Keep it going. I want to know why the mouse was being burned. Is that in the next chapter?
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on February 12, 2014, 11:19:47 PM
Quote from: Gnoflet on February 12, 2014, 10:58:34 PM
Keep it going. I want to know why the mouse was being burned. Is that in the next chapter?
Thanks for reading! No it isn't in the next chapter but it will be told about towards the end I think. If I have it planned right. I am rewriting some of the end because it didn't turn out right.
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on February 26, 2014, 07:44:36 PM
Sorry, accidental post.

Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Captain Tammo on March 02, 2014, 04:42:00 AM
How long are you expecting it to be when you're finished?
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on March 02, 2014, 03:46:28 PM
Dunno. I have most of the whole story done....(It is quite lengthy) but I am rewriting he end.
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Captain Tammo on March 02, 2014, 06:57:59 PM
Oh cool! Well I'm looking forward to reading the rest! ;)
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on March 04, 2014, 05:44:30 PM
Thank you for reading! My computer which I have my story on isn't working that well so I hope to have a chapter up soon!
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Firetail on March 15, 2014, 12:46:05 PM
I read it & thought it was great!  :) I can't wait for the rest!
    Thank you for sharing!
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on March 15, 2014, 05:44:52 PM
Thank you!
Title: Re: Discussion topic for My Story (I don't have a name for it yet)!
Post by: Tam and Martin on March 29, 2014, 03:45:42 PM
Chapter 2 is up! Please READ!!!!


And sorry in advance. I copied and pasted it from Microsoft word to here and when it was on the screen, it would let me change some of the way it was written around so the way it looks is terrible.
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