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Fan Works => Fan Fiction => Topic started by: Captain Tammo on June 25, 2019, 03:34:28 AM

Title: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Captain Tammo on June 25, 2019, 03:34:28 AM
Time for a new contest!

(https://i.imgur.com/oFgSsZw.png)

Hey now! So what's the catch on this second go-around?

The theme: the theme of the competition is, can you keep a secret? All fanfic entries must have a secret that gets revealed in the story. It could be through dialogue, imagery, epiphany or more. If you incorporate that element into your story, then you qualify for the contest. The rest of the content is all up to you!

Length: Exactly as long as it needs to be to tell the story! But please keep it in the style of a one-shot (i.e. one entry or chapter). The entry can be an excerpt from an existing fanfic you wrote, so long as you find a way to incorporate the theme into it! You may also nominate other peoples' works that are on the forum!

Judging: Once more, it is yours truly! I'm just looking for a good yarn, but reach out via PM or comment below if you have specific questions!

Timeline: the competition begins as soon as you read this (i.e. right now!) and ends July 26th, or when it's deemed that all the forum members who'd like to participate have already submitted. Whichever comes first!

Prizes: This one will have a grand prize! Details are still being ironed out (hence the delay)

Most importantly, how to enter: to enter, just post your fanfic on the board and include [Tammo's Competition II] in the subject line. I'll come read it and let you know when I've finished!

That covers it! Get busy, and keep it a secret!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Jack the Quick on June 25, 2019, 03:37:18 AM
Interesting, I'll try to write up an entry for this one.
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: MathLuk on June 25, 2019, 04:05:51 AM
Thank you, Captain!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Sebias of Redwall on June 25, 2019, 02:33:31 PM
Thanks Captain Tammo!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: The Grey Coincidence on June 25, 2019, 02:44:35 PM
All hail TAMMO!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: MeadowR on June 25, 2019, 07:05:06 PM
I'll certainly give this some consideration seeing as I'm trying to write a bit more again. :)
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Time on June 26, 2019, 07:47:19 AM
I'll give it a shot. Nothing to lose.
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: One-Eye the wildcat on June 27, 2019, 02:18:30 AM
Same here.
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Mommui on July 03, 2019, 08:15:57 PM
It could be fun to try
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: MathLuk on July 05, 2019, 05:50:37 PM
Is posting more than one submission allowed?
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Captain Tammo on July 07, 2019, 06:06:55 PM
Absolutely!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Jack the Quick on July 23, 2019, 01:58:25 PM
Did you guys hear the news?!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Sebias of Redwall on July 24, 2019, 07:37:47 PM
Oh. I thought we had to submit by the 30th... I must've read that wrong the first time. *Runs off in a panic to finish my one-shot*

(EDIT) @Captain Tammo when do you think the results will be posted?
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Captain Tammo on July 31, 2019, 01:00:17 AM
@Sebias of Redwall  I'm late with the results - I thought I could get away with it and post before anyone noticed, but I should know better than to try sneaking around this attentive group of Redwallers  ;D that's not a bad thing - I'm glad you guys are excited.

That said, I'll finish the last couple reviews tonight ;D
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Captain Tammo on July 31, 2019, 04:08:23 AM
Double-posting because I HAVE THE RESULTS!

We had a couple more entries this time around and I had a lot of fun reading through all of these. Vermin were much more prominent characters in this round, and it made for a fresh take on the themes from Redwall stories that we all know and love. I also noticed that there was quite a bit about royalty / nobility in this batch of stories. It was kind of neat seeing how you all approached stories with that central tie. Each one of you has a creative flair and style of note!

I highly suggest checking out each other's works. That's what this competition is all about: practicing writing and also engaging one another in the process and reading some fun stories! Here is the list of entries - in no particular order:

Excerpt from Sixclaw (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=11080.0) by @One-Eye the wildcat

     Take Your Place (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=11089.0) by @MathLuk

          Flames of Truth (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=11092.0) by @MathLuk

               Kingkiller Excerpt (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=11098.0) by @Jack the Quick

                    Black and White Drabbles II (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=10951.0) by @The Grey Coincidence

                         Prophecies and Warriors Excerpt (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=11110.0) by @Sebias of Redwall

I'll be going back through my notes and leaving reviews on all of your stories to talk about the things I liked - which there was a lot of! That will be happening over the next few days. But now it's time for the results! The top three finishers of the second fanfiction competition are:

Top Three


First place and winner of our medal for the second competition: Black and White Drabbles II by The Grey Coincidence!

Here's a medal for your signature, Grey! Congratulations (and a sincere thank you to our dear @Rosie Willowwater for designing this)!

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Second place and third place go to Jack the Quick's Kingkiller Excerpt and Mathluk's Take Your Place, respectively. Well done you guys!
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Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: MathLuk on July 31, 2019, 11:22:17 AM
Congratulations, Grey!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: The Grey Coincidence on July 31, 2019, 12:57:31 PM
Hehehe... wow... d-didn't expect that... Thanks Math and Tammo... wow...

Er... @Keldor looks like Bork took the cake XD
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Jack the Quick on July 31, 2019, 03:08:15 PM
Great job, Grey!
Er, @Captain Tammo, does One-Eye's entry get second or mine? Because it says One-Eye's Kingkiller excerpt, but I wrote the Kingkiller Excerpt.
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Keldor on July 31, 2019, 03:59:15 PM
Quote from: The Grey Coincidence on July 31, 2019, 12:57:31 PM
Hehehe... wow... d-didn't expect that... Thanks Math and Tammo... wow...

Er... @Keldor looks like Bork took the cake XD

"Cake?  There's more cake??"

Nice work, now he's drooling again.

Also, congratulations too!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Sebias of Redwall on July 31, 2019, 04:01:44 PM
Congrats Grey! Great job everyone!

Quote from: Jack the Quick on July 31, 2019, 03:08:15 PM
Er, @Captain Tammo, does One-Eye's entry get second or mine? Because it says One-Eye's Kingkiller excerpt, but I wrote the Kingkiller Excerpt.
I was wondering the same thing.
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Captain Tammo on July 31, 2019, 07:19:57 PM
OH MY GOSH I'LL FIX THAT IM SO SORRY, Kingkiller is the story that placed.
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Jack the Quick on July 31, 2019, 08:09:21 PM
Thanks, Tammo!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: One-Eye the wildcat on July 31, 2019, 11:26:31 PM
Nice work, grey!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Mommui on August 01, 2019, 04:07:24 AM
Congratulations Gray!!! Im proud of you
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: The Grey Coincidence on August 01, 2019, 04:40:11 AM
Geez... thanks everyone! Honestly love you guys
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Rosie Willowwater on August 02, 2019, 12:22:16 PM
Congrats, Grey! I hope you like your medal. :)
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: The Grey Coincidence on August 02, 2019, 03:06:39 PM
Yes thanks Rosie. I shall wear it as a badge of honor! And flaunt it wherever I go!
Title: Re: Tammo's Fan Fiction Competition II: Can you keep a secret?
Post by: Captain Tammo on August 04, 2019, 11:40:21 PM
Love your new signature, Grey. Very tongue in cheek ;)

Again, really nice work to you all. These kinds of contests can really be fun motivation for honing your writing skills in a fun way. Just PM me if you want a round 3 :)