The Creature woke up...out of the corner of his eye he saw...
"Er. My aching head!"
Looks over at the creature in a dark cloak.
"Come on up now. We have to get going and I have to tell you something."
Puts out fire with water and starts to cook breakfast.
"Wait i saw something" it said in a gruff voice... pulling out a axe
The squirrel froze.... He had heard rustling nearby... He baked up into a tree and listened carefully for ANY sound...
OOC: will you describe the setting a bit more?
OOC: Yeah, that would be nice...
OOC: i'm almost afraid to do anything in case it doesn't fit with the setting.
OOC: So Me and Taggerung the Otter are in the Mossflower and we bump into Redwall Abbey wandering. We are there for like a couple days, and we are up on the battlements and spot vermin coming up from the path. Then we have to fight them off. Get it now?
BIC: "Hmm.I didn't see anything. Where?"
Stops cooking and looks around.
The albino squirrel heard something again, and now had a position to listen too!
"Err...We need to get going now. We can't worry about what you thought you saw."
Starts to pack up ingredients and herbs, and passes some scones and elderberry wine to cloak figure.
OOC:
Quote from: MatthiasMan on April 30, 2012, 10:23:19 PM
"Err...We need to get going now. We can't worry about what you thought you saw."
Starts to pack up ingredients and herbs, and passes some scones and elderberry wine to cloak figure.
When you do actions like: Starts to pack up ingredients and herbs, and passes some scones and elderberry wine to cloak figure.
You should put * at the front and back of the phrase like this:
*Starts to pack up ingredients and herbs, and passes some scones and elderberry wine to cloak figure*.
Okay? BIC:
The hiding squirrel heard the rustling and slowly made his way up a sycamore where he could get a better view of the situation...
Wait *throws axe at the bushes*
Kawher Linster was hit by the axe, which turned out to be blunt. she, not being a mime, cried out in pain.
The stranger in the trees had witnessed the proccedings and quickly... quitely, dropped out of the beach tree he was in and pulled the stricken form out of the way of possible attack.
hearing the voice the creature advanced with a sharp sword
Kawher woke up, punched Treerifler, and ran away.
OOC: thievery is a touchy job, Kawher had no way of knowing you were a friend.
what else would i refer to your character as?
if i was right about what i was autoing then it should be fixed, and i gave reasoning to all of the other things.
OOC: Whoa, whoa whoa! Hold it a minute Psy!
1. You autoed my character (there are few things that make me more mad than autoing my characters
2. WHY IN THE WORLD WOULD YOU PUNCH ME FOR GETTING YOU OUT OF SIGHT!!
3. Treerifler is a title I have, not my name
4. Do you seriously think I'm not going to follow you to the bush your hiding in?
5. I'm going to politely request you re-do your post.
OOC: dannflorreguba, i fixed it (i think), so can the rp continue?
OOC: So I'm just supposed to walk away? That doesn't make any sense.
OOC: did i ever say you did? chase her if you want, or don't if you don't want to.
OOC: How many RP's have you been a part of? Just wondering. One more thing, try and find a term to refer to me as OTHER than Treerifler, other people that come and read this RP will get confused when my name actually shows up. BIC:
The white squirrel was confused, he'd just helped another squirrel but when she came too she attacked him and ran off! He was still trying to figure things out when he heard the quite approach of the strange thing (taggerung the otter)...
OOC: none, this is my first, explains a lot, doesn't it? technically this is my first forum too, anyway how about albino for the referential name?
OOC: For reference, just do what I've been doing, white squirrel, stranger, albino, traveler. Things like that.
after Kawher was a safe distance away, she sat down and started eating some food she managed to take from some vermin camp
OOC: Little tip, be more specific.
Quote from: psybox on May 01, 2012, 03:56:03 PM
after Kawher was a safe distance away, she sat down and started eating some food she managed to take from some vermin camp
That sounds a little... flat. You need to add some spice and description to your posts like maybe:
After Kawher had run a fair distance from the scene, she sat, rested, and started to eat (What was she eating?) she had stolen from a (where is the vermin camp?).
Just trying to give you some ideas and guide you along as you learn to RP... It takes practice.
After Kawher had run a fair distance from the scene, she sat, rested, and started to eat some sort of rotten tasting fish she had stolen from a vermin camp near some red building. she started wondering if maybe the big red building had better food.
OOC: i decided that she's new to mossflower.
OOC: Hee hee hee! That sounds ALOT better by the way.
kawher started planning her next theft soon after, this would probably include a few days of visiting the area. she tried to find her way back to the red house, or redwall, which is what the vermin called it.
OOC: ok..lets get back to the stroy
OOC: We are on it... I'm waiting for you to make your move on me.
OOC: you mean?
OOC: I'm close to you, you threw an axe at Kawher, I dragged her off, she ran away, and your in the shrubbery close to me.
OOC:Er...Okay I didn't get what just happened now. Anyway.
BIC: "Well if you aren't going to come with me cloak, then I'm gonna go on my own. Ya with me?"
*Starts to walk west and falls into the ditch.*
"Whhoooaa....Oooff!"
OOC: is that the ditch if front of redwall? i'll simply assume so, if it isn't i'll edit the post.
kawher heard a sound like someone falling down a hole. she recognized it as one of those two squirrels she encountered earlier that day, and became nervous that they would recognize her. she quickly abandoned all planning, and ran up the highest tree and jumped over the wall.
The albino squirrel had heard the noise too. He flew up a Birch tree he had been standing by and investigated the scene. He chuckled slightly at the creature below him, and his former unawareness of the deep ditch.
OOC: my character is in redwall. it's time to have some redwallers appear, don't you think?
OOC: Yes I do.
BIC: "Owoow. Erg. Why am I always walking in the front? And when I'm not, nothing ever happens."
*climbs out and stares wide mouthed at what's in front of him*
The crature sees the aquirell and races after it
OOC: could each person have two characters? i wouldn't ask except my character is in redwall, and can't do anything until we have redwallers.
Quote from: Taggerung The Otter on May 02, 2012, 12:09:47 PM
The crature sees the aquirell and races after it
OOC: Which squirrel? I'm up a tree, and Kawher (psybox) is in Redwall.
OOC: i think he meant you. when you posted a summary of the rp, it kinda made it seem as if you wanted him to chase you or something so he decided to chase you a bit late. also what time of day is it?
OOC: morinig...you
BIC: He throws the knife at the albino creature in the tree
The squirrel drops to a lower branch quickly, then bounds off to the southern side of the Abbey. (You are on the western side)
OOC: how about the weather? is there any reason why the redwaller would be inside rather than outside?
Followning closly is the creature
OOC: why is there no answer?
OOC: for what
The white squirrel was waiting, back to an Ash tree, wielding his oak staff.
my character is in a stalemate unless a redwaller joins or there is some reason for all of them to be inside. if i a squirrel suddenly appears on the battlements then it would look silly if nobeast goes to investigate, but no one is rping as a redwaller so no one can investigate. so is there a reason for all of them to be inside?
The creture sences this and comes around the cornier throwing a axe
OOC: i need an answer! please give me one.
OC: for vhat
OOC:we have more people...hold on
OOC: this:
Quote from: psybox on May 02, 2012, 11:51:13 PM
OOC: how about the weather? is there any reason why the redwaller would be inside rather than outside?
OOC:idk
The squirrel traveler ducked the flying blade, and swung at his attackers legs.
who jumped
The creature was quick, yes... But didn't consider were he was headed fast enough, the albino squirrel swung up with the staff at the form coming down...
OOC:
1. Are we going to find out what you are?
2. How much RPing have you done in the past?
OOC: me...a bad stuff ton...maybee
OOC: Then why are your posts so bland? You need to add some flavor!
OOC: he said he was in a lot, not that he was good at it.
*starts to walk towards Redwall Abbey and knocks on the door*
"Hello? Anybody home?"
Quote from: psybox on May 03, 2012, 03:06:21 AM
OOC: he said he was in a lot, not that he was good at it.
OOC: i am a bit rished when i post these
OOC: Do you guys mind if we pause for a bit and discuss this RP, Matthias, you should be with your traveling partner.
OOC: okay, we need redwaller and villains. we have neither. time to get some advertising up, don't you think?
OOC: MM said he would do that
OOC: Yeah, that's part of the story. Anyway, the story is that we wander to the Abbey and we are on the battlements and arrows start coming out of the trees. Then we have to fight off the evil vermin.
BIC: *walks into abbey silently*
Tevut wandered around the vermin camp shouting at the topp of his voice, "Scum, the filthy lot of yew. Off of ye bottoms you lazy lot get up with have an Abbey to capture. Ahoy there by the way.. does any beast know anythin about Redwall?!"
Abbot Dorminton accompanied by the Friar and other companions, namely squirrels and mice, walked up to Isaac.
Dorminton:"Greetings, and welcome to Redwall Abbey. I am Abbot Dorminton."
Isaac: (bowing)"Hello and thank you Abbot Dorminton. I am Issac Salamander, son of Sora The Plasma. I am a wanderer and warrior."
Dorminton:"Hmm. For a traveler you have manners beyond me. Zeldu will be your tourist."
A squirrel walked up silently and nodded to Father Abbot.
Kawher noticed an otter climbing up the battlements, when it arrived it cheerfully said "'ello, who might you be? i'm skipper!" after a rather awkward silence Kawher finally said "Kawher Linster, pleased to meet you" although she didn't look, or sound very pleased.
OOC: Are you talking to me?
BIC: Isaac:"Pleased to meet you. I'm Isaac Salamander. My friend cloak, I don't know where he is. I thought he followed me into the Abbey.
OOC: technically, i was talking to myself. that was Kawher's first encounter with skipper.
Major Alexander Ragsdale was on an assignment from Lord Windblade of Salamandastron to aid the creatures of Redwall in any way necessary, as well as to patrol Mossflower woods for any signs of suspicious activity. Ragsdale marched up to the East wicker gate and noticed it was ajar. Walking inside, he found the Abbot, a group of abbey-dwellers, and a figure in front who looked to be a traveler of some sort. The hare waited by the gate for the creatures to finish speaking so that he could make his salutations.
OOC: Both skipper and Kawher are characters of mine, and you have to sign up here. (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=1799.0)
OOC: I signed up, and Im sorry, I thought that the otter was Tag's character for some reason :S Silly me...
OOC: this is a bliddy mess
OOC: How?
Foremole walked out of the Abbey. Seeing a group of Redwallers, he walked up to them: "Who'm you be, young squirrely."
OOC: albino isn't in redwall. read through what has already happened before you post. sorry if that was too harsh sounding.
No prob!
changed it