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Title: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Romsca on January 21, 2013, 03:04:09 PM
Please post here any comments, constructive criticism, or feedback you may have on my story. Thanks! My story is found here (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=3394.0).
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Leatho Shellhound on January 21, 2013, 06:20:21 PM
Your story is fantastic!
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Romsca on January 21, 2013, 06:44:12 PM
Thanks!
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Kitsune on January 21, 2013, 07:57:21 PM
It's great!
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Mattio on January 21, 2013, 08:33:23 PM
Its very good
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Romsca on February 10, 2013, 04:05:13 PM
I just posted the start of chapter two!  :D
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Leatho Shellhound on February 10, 2013, 07:19:18 PM
Cool!
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Romsca on February 15, 2013, 10:30:52 PM
The trap mentioned at the new paragraph in chapter two would be like a modern bear trap (think the Fox and the Hound)
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Leatho Shellhound on February 15, 2013, 10:42:30 PM
Awesome!
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Romsca on February 18, 2013, 03:02:55 AM
Announcement: I've completed chapter two!
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: Leatho Shellhound on February 18, 2013, 03:56:26 AM
Great!
Title: Re: Feedback for Romsca's story about Leatho Shellhound (name will change soon)
Post by: cregga rose eyes on February 18, 2013, 04:32:05 PM
It is really great!
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