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Fan Works => Fan Fiction => Topic started by: AnnaofRedwall on June 12, 2013, 07:10:03 PM

Title: Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback
Post by: AnnaofRedwall on June 12, 2013, 07:10:03 PM
I'd really like it if you've read the story I'm writing if you could give me some pointers and such here! Thanks a ton. :)
~AnnaofRedwall

PS: this should be the link to the actual story, I think http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=4171.msg193723#msg193723 (http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=4171.msg193723#msg193723)
Title: Re: Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback
Post by: KitrallStreamrippler on June 12, 2013, 07:46:20 PM
I love it! You have a very intriguing style. Keep the good work, Anna!
Title: Re: Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback
Post by: rachel25 on June 15, 2013, 03:06:54 PM
I've only read the Prolouge and it reminds me a bit of Elaila  ;) but it's nicely written I will be reading some more I'm just a bit busy at the moment  ;D
Title: Re: Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback
Post by: AnnaofRedwall on June 16, 2013, 08:53:34 PM
of all the story, i like the prolouge best!
Title: Re: Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback
Post by: rachel25 on June 20, 2013, 02:24:14 PM
yeah it is good isn't it  8)
Title: Re: Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback
Post by: AnnaofRedwall on June 25, 2013, 03:15:40 AM
when i wrote that part my creative juices were really flowing...  ;D
Title: Re: Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback
Post by: rachel25 on July 02, 2013, 03:36:21 PM
It's a really good  ;D
Title: Re: Child of Snow: a Tale of Redwall feedback
Post by: AnnaofRedwall on July 14, 2013, 12:19:42 AM
thanks a TON!!!!!!!!!!
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