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Sentence rephrase

Started by Ally046, October 20, 2021, 01:24:46 PM

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Ally046

You will get a sentence from the person above you, and you will try to rephrase it five ways.

Girls vs. boys, posting must alternate.

You may @ the person you want to respond.


@Verd:  She sat down in her rocking chair, and slowly began rocking.

Verdauga

The female reclined in her pivoting seat and reluctantly strummed her death metal guitar.
or
Slowly beginning to rock, she sat down in her rocking chair.
or
She began rocking slowly, and sat rocking in her down chair
or
Rocking slowly, she sat down in her chair.
or
She sat down slowly, and her rocking chair began rocking.

That's how you're supposed to do it, right?
I've been looking back over these past few months, and I've felt off. Felt different. At the time, I wanted nothing more than to go back to the good old days.
But now? Could I just ignore all the ways I've suffered and grown? Caught hold and let go? Could I return from life, having now lived?

Ally046

Mm. Those aren't exactly rephrased, but I think the game will warm up.

You forgot to add a sentence for the next poster?

Verdauga

You night have to provide an example of it then. ;)

"The curtains closed while the set collapsed."
I've been looking back over these past few months, and I've felt off. Felt different. At the time, I wanted nothing more than to go back to the good old days.
But now? Could I just ignore all the ways I've suffered and grown? Caught hold and let go? Could I return from life, having now lived?

Ally046

#4
As the set began collapsing, the curtain closed.

The curtain closed in front of a collapsing set.

Curtain closing, the set collapsed.

The set collapsed as the set caved in.

The collapsing set was hidden by the closing curtain.

(Just try not to add much new information)(you way infer, but don't completely add)

"The teacher waved a paper and called out to the exited children."  @Flib Bigboat