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The Raid (Co-written with Keva Strongbow)

Started by Sebias of Redwall, April 30, 2020, 05:56:05 PM

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Sebias of Redwall

April 30, 2020, 05:56:05 PM
"I can only speak two languages. English and rubbish." ~Brian Jacques <br /><br />"No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly." <br /><br />"Evil labours with vast power and perpetual success - in vain: preparing always only the soil for unexpected good to sprout in."<br /><br />~JRR Tolkien<br /><br />Long live the RRR!

The Skarzs

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May 07, 2020, 03:13:43 AM
Boy, that didn't end like I thought it would at all. O_O I thought it was just going to be a lighthearted, slice of life sort of fic, but I forgot the title since I had it open in a different tab for a couple days. I suppose I should have seen it coming.
Still, why didn't you give a little more hope for the future? XD
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Sebias of Redwall

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May 07, 2020, 03:17:03 PM Last Edit: May 07, 2020, 11:09:02 PM by Sebias of Redwall
*Cackles evilly* Yeah, the lighthearted stuff in the beginning was mostly written by Keva. All the, er, (SPOILER) doom and gloom was probably written by me.  :laugh:

Hope you enjoyed it, though!
"I can only speak two languages. English and rubbish." ~Brian Jacques <br /><br />"No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly." <br /><br />"Evil labours with vast power and perpetual success - in vain: preparing always only the soil for unexpected good to sprout in."<br /><br />~JRR Tolkien<br /><br />Long live the RRR!

The Skarzs

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May 07, 2020, 06:02:20 PM
Yes, I enjoyed it.
There were a couple awkward spots to read, bit overall it was good.
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Sebias of Redwall

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May 08, 2020, 06:15:08 PM
Yeah, we wrote it a while ago (Well, not too long I guess. Jun 24, 2019. But still...).  :laugh: We should probably go back one of these days and edit it sometime... :P
"I can only speak two languages. English and rubbish." ~Brian Jacques <br /><br />"No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly." <br /><br />"Evil labours with vast power and perpetual success - in vain: preparing always only the soil for unexpected good to sprout in."<br /><br />~JRR Tolkien<br /><br />Long live the RRR!

The Skarzs

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May 08, 2020, 08:04:39 PM
Just leave it the way it is. ;) Use it to improve your next one.
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