They Weren't the Heroes We Wanted

[Skyblade]

Very nice. I laughed at some parts too ~

[Eulaliaaa!]

Thank you  remember, constructive criticism is always welcome.

[Captain Tammo]

Nice adventure, Eulaliaaa!

I think this is an all-around fun fanfic. You've got the baddies, who are bad because they're bad, and the goodies, who are good because they're good. When I first started reading this, I was felt like something was a bit off and I couldn't quite figure out why. It wasn't until I got to judging for the RAFF Awards that I realized something: if you try to read this story as your traditional "Tale of Redwall", you may not be quite as satisfied. But if you try to imagine that you are reading a comic book, things get much more enjoyable! It turns into one of the better AU stories that I've read here on the forum.

Keep up the good work, I hope you've got more content coming soon!