Good Vs. Evil Series Discussion Topic

[Leatho Shellhound]

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

[Redwaller]

Chapter 5 is up!

[Thomas Barkshield]

I like your fanfic alot, but one thing didn't make sense: First you have the captain send men to get stone, and then a couple of minutes later in the story you have the stonework done! I hope you do not see this as too negative, it just didn't make sense to me. BTW you can put my Dranfor Rofnard up here.

[Redwaller]

Another mistake I made, I'll fix it.

And I'll do that ASAP.

[Redwaller]

Fixed it! And I'm working on Chapter 6!

[Redwaller]

The illustration of chapter 5 is up!

[Redwaller]

Should I keep on writing this? Or does nobody still read it? I need to know, so that I can focus either on this, or on Gasher's story.

[Redwaller]

Since there is a lack of feedback, I will close this series for now, though in the future I might come back and finish it.

[Leatho Shellhound]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!!! I want to see what happens with Flurseus and Danjosal!!! You can't stop now!!!

[Redwaller]

I thought nobody still read it, since I still have feedback, I'll probably go on writing, although I'll be shared between that and a series I'm planning(which I will be making a topic for in The Orchard soon)

[Leatho Shellhound]

Yay!!!

[Redwaller]

NEW:

I've composed a poem for the book, and thought I'd release it now for you guys:

'The voice of the dead is ringing,
And you are the one to hear it,
Beware the warning,
For the candles of Death have been lit.
The shell and the bone you must shake,
And a decision you must make,
Choose the right path,
Or face the hero's wrath.
The righteous will fall,
If you destroy the red wall,
The sea will issue its plea,
And one will have to flee.'