Ships and Skies

[Rainshadow]

  Haha, as I was reading that last portion, I nearly shouted out, "BAD SKYE!"  I didn't though, because it's 7 AM where I am.  That would be kind of awkward.
  Anyway, that was really good!  *Looks up with sad puppy eyes*  "Please, Ma'am, may I have some more?"

[W0NWILL]

Mmm...I might write some more when I'm heading home, when I'm not watching Pirates of the Caribbean, reading Watership Down or Martin the Warrior, taking a nap, being chewed out by mum, visiting Wisconsin museums, watching my little sister or my cousins, etc., etc. Not that I'm busy. Oh well, I'll get the next chapter up tomorrow. There's little else to do in the car.

[Redwaller]

It's great!

There's a few errors in the chapters:

Lyl didn't seem the sort you wanted to be against you. It should be:
Lyl didn't seem the sort you wanted to be against.

And another one:

Fee shifted to talon to talon. It should be:
Fee shifted from talon to talon.

Otherwise, It's great!

[W0NWILL]

Thanks for pointing out those. I'll fix them right away.

[Redwaller]

No prob! 

[UNKN0WN]

This picture gives me a great idea, I'm going to draw something like it

[Romsca]

Are you going to continue this?

[W0NWILL]

Yes, just going through writing block. However, I have been working on the next chapter.