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Wha' dae ye think about thiz plot?

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Redwall Musician

#45
September 18, 2011, 04:08:34 AM
This is my third character:

Name: Tibbit Fentenno
Age: 29 seasons
Occupation: Long patrol hare
Species: hare

That is the last hare in Elmswift's patrol.

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HeadInAnotherGalaxy

#46
September 23, 2011, 03:12:48 AM
Just a headz up, the eagle bearin' the newz o' the vermin horde will be arrivin' zoon. An' zpeakin' o' the vermin horde, we ztill need zomeone tae play az the vermin leader, an' a few other vermin characterz widnae hurt either...
NARDOLE; You are completely out of your mind!
DOCTOR: How is that news to anyone?

"I am Yomin Carr, the harbinger of doom. I am the beginning of the end of your people!" -Yomin Carr

-Sometime later, the second mate was unexpectedly rescued by the subplot, which had been trailing a bit behind the boat (and the plot). The whole story moved along.

Nightfire

#47
September 23, 2011, 02:35:32 PM
If you want, Raio Rei can be that eagle. I can have him go out for a flight, then spot the horde.
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HeadInAnotherGalaxy

#48
September 23, 2011, 11:19:20 PM
Zorry, but the eagle needz tae get there, tell the newz, an' then die o' exauztion.
NARDOLE; You are completely out of your mind!
DOCTOR: How is that news to anyone?

"I am Yomin Carr, the harbinger of doom. I am the beginning of the end of your people!" -Yomin Carr

-Sometime later, the second mate was unexpectedly rescued by the subplot, which had been trailing a bit behind the boat (and the plot). The whole story moved along.

Nightfire

#49
September 23, 2011, 11:22:48 PM
Oh. Why's he need to die? :(
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HeadInAnotherGalaxy

#50
September 24, 2011, 11:51:01 PM Last Edit: September 25, 2011, 12:03:16 AM by HeadInAnotherGalaxy
I dinnae ken. Effect? Drama? Action? Who kenz? Who carez?

Alzae, az zoon az we have a vermin leader we canae the eagle appear.
NARDOLE; You are completely out of your mind!
DOCTOR: How is that news to anyone?

"I am Yomin Carr, the harbinger of doom. I am the beginning of the end of your people!" -Yomin Carr

-Sometime later, the second mate was unexpectedly rescued by the subplot, which had been trailing a bit behind the boat (and the plot). The whole story moved along.

DanielofRedwall

#51
October 10, 2011, 05:46:43 AM
I'll be the vermin leader, then. I only have two characters.

Name: Ballista the Fierce
Age: However old Cluny was in Redwall
Species: Ferret
Weapon: Sword, and a nice one at that!
Occupation: Leader of vermin horde full of all the usual vermin (rats, weasels etc)
Other: Has a vixen seer, who anyone can contol, all the vermin horde really admire his sword and want to steal it. A Ballista is a type of catapult.
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