The Wedding of StrongCoincidence

[Booklover]

(When repeat a word you should put some form of punctuation in between)

Shouldn't that be 'when you repeat'?

Will Will will money to Horace in his Will? (If they ever die, it will be protecting each other in battle, or quietly in bed)

Halt, Halt!

I had had a good day.

The police and buffalo sequences.

[shisteer of nothing much]

(I didn't feel the need to translate that 'oo' because you had it correct in your own translation)

[Kade Rivok]

(When repeat a word you should put some form of punctuation in between)

I specifically chose to not do so because I knew some beast would be perturbed by it 

I won't do it.  I'm a strong chook.  I won't give in.

DO IT!!!!

No!

[shisteer of nothing much]

'Umph! *grumpily swallows food*

[Sebias of Redwall]

*Swallows and licks lips*

[lass of something much]

(When repeat a word you should put some form of punctuation in between)

I specifically chose to not do so because I knew some beast would be perturbed by it 

I won't do it.  I'm a strong chook.  I won't give in.

DO IT!!!!

No!

*is sad*

[Sebias of Redwall]

*Gives Lass a duckling*

[lass of something much]

*gasps*
Thank you!
*gently hugs duckling and pats it's fuzzy little head*

Aw, cute little fella!

[shisteer of nothing much]

Cute! What are you going to name her?

[lass of something much]

Elbert!

[Booklover]

*sighs* Will you never learn?

[lass of something much]

*Hugs Elbert*

[Sebias of Redwall]

[Ebantu the Kararehe]

*dies from overexposure to pure cuteness*

[lass of something much]

*puts Elbert on Ebby to revive her*