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Booklover

Error. Error. Cannot compute.

Verdauga

Maaaaaayyybbee. I'm not a fan of the dialogue in MDG, and I felt I had too-rushed and simultaneously too little action in my "cold-war -style" stories.
I've been looking back over these past few months, and I've felt off. Felt different. At the time, I wanted nothing more than to go back to the good old days.
But now? Could I just ignore all the ways I've suffered and grown? Caught hold and let go? Could I return from life, having now lived?

shisteer of nothing much

Quote from: Booklover on June 15, 2020, 01:47:42 PM
Quote from: Verdauga on June 15, 2020, 01:17:03 PM
Quote from: Booklover on June 15, 2020, 01:15:05 PM
I think I generally end up with too much dialogue and not enough description.
No kidding. I struggle with cutting off dialogue.

Speaking of, have you posted a fanfic or other work here, Booklovee?
No. You'll have to wait until I write a half-decent one.
Book, most authors don't consider their work half decent. If authors let their own opinions of their own work hold them back, there would be very few books in this world.
    I have a shiny thing! See?


And also some random, unnecessary coding.[/li][/list]<br /><br />

Long live the RRR!

Booklover

Error. Error. Cannot compute.

Verdauga

I've been looking back over these past few months, and I've felt off. Felt different. At the time, I wanted nothing more than to go back to the good old days.
But now? Could I just ignore all the ways I've suffered and grown? Caught hold and let go? Could I return from life, having now lived?

Booklover

Error. Error. Cannot compute.

Verdauga

I've been looking back over these past few months, and I've felt off. Felt different. At the time, I wanted nothing more than to go back to the good old days.
But now? Could I just ignore all the ways I've suffered and grown? Caught hold and let go? Could I return from life, having now lived?

Booklover

Error. Error. Cannot compute.

Verdauga

'Twas implied. I can't really force you to do anything. I phrased it as a command to . . . Exhort you. . . To post it.
I've been looking back over these past few months, and I've felt off. Felt different. At the time, I wanted nothing more than to go back to the good old days.
But now? Could I just ignore all the ways I've suffered and grown? Caught hold and let go? Could I return from life, having now lived?

Booklover

Error. Error. Cannot compute.

Verdauga

I've been looking back over these past few months, and I've felt off. Felt different. At the time, I wanted nothing more than to go back to the good old days.
But now? Could I just ignore all the ways I've suffered and grown? Caught hold and let go? Could I return from life, having now lived?

shisteer of nothing much

    I have a shiny thing! See?


And also some random, unnecessary coding.[/li][/list]<br /><br />

Long live the RRR!

Ebantu the Kararehe

Quote from: Booklover on June 15, 2020, 01:15:05 PM
I think I generally end up with too much dialogue and not enough description.
Same here. :P
Infant Ebby is a smol, out-of-control firebending terror. It's a good thing she's also quite cute.

May the road rise up to meet you.
May the wind be always at your back.
May the sun shine warm upon your face,
And rains fall soft upon your fields.
And until we meet again,
May God hold you in the palm of His hand.


shisteer of nothing much

    I have a shiny thing! See?


And also some random, unnecessary coding.[/li][/list]<br /><br />

Long live the RRR!

One-Eye the wildcat

My story is bad, unless your standards are abysmally low.
"What will become of us? Where will we go, we who wander this vast wasteland in search of our better selves?"

"Introduce a little anarchy. Upset the established order, and everything becomes chaos. I'm an agent of chaos."
Long live the RRR!!