corin the black fox

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

sorry guys, i'll try to write cap 7 in a week or so. it's just that i'm so busy.

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

hey guys, i know it's been a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnng time sense i posted here, but i was think, i ws looking over corin in my files, and it seems pretty boring, the story line goes all over the place, and when the people/mamals talk it doesn't seem real, so i think i should Discontinue  writing it(it was my first writing so i just wanted to see what people think). but i think i should ask you guys want you think. so please post. I'll pm you.

[MatthiasMan]

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! No, No, No, NOOOOO! . . . . . . .






Nooooooooo!

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! No, No, No, NOOOOO! . . . . . . .






Nooooooooo!

well......i'm guessing you don't want me to stop...

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

okay, I'll wait until redwaller replies , then I'll make my choice....

[WarriorOfMossflower]

Heyyo, Rake, if you think your story isn't good enough, you don't have to keep writing. I personally enjoy it so far. Maybe you could rewrite it to where you like it more. Just because you don't think it's that good right now doesn't mean that you can't go back and revise. I'll even help you build it up better and stronger if you want.

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

Okay, thanks! i personally don't really want to end it now DX because i now have two people who'd like it do continue. So here's what i decided, I'll rewrite  the proluge, cap 1 - 6, then I'll write up cap 7 in a week. ^^
sound good?

Heyyo, Rake, if you think your story isn't good enough, you don't have to keep writing. I personally enjoy it so far. Maybe you could rewrite it to where you like it more. Just because you don't think it's that good right now doesn't mean that you can't go back and revise. I'll even help you build it up better and stronger if you want.

[MatthiasMan]

Awesome! I'll be waiting. . . If you'd like Captain I can help you. I like to make a good story.

[WarriorOfMossflower]

Sure thing Rake! Keep it up! We're always here for help if you need us.

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

thank you guys so much!!
..........................i think what i need is a editor...XD

Sure thing Rake! Keep it up! We're always here for help if you need us.

[WarriorOfMossflower]

*waves hand frantically* I'll be your editor!
I've always wanted to be an editor... lol

[MatthiasMan]

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh! Yay yay yay! Now the story will continue! Finally!

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

okay XD i i'll give you i short story of mine to edit, so i can see if i like it. XD
@man;; yes, it shall continue XD at long last the lazy writer is beginning to rite once more. XD

*waves hand frantically* I'll be your editor!
I've always wanted to be an editor... lol

[WarriorOfMossflower]

okay XD i i'll give you i short story of mine to edit, so i can see if i like it. XD
@man;; yes, it shall continue XD at long last the lazy writer is beginning to rite once more. XD

*waves hand frantically* I'll be your editor!
I've always wanted to be an editor... lol

Yay, I'll try my best!

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

'Farris look like a little babe happy over a candied chestnut ' lol Xd i can't believe i wrote that line, it so...Xd i don't know but it doesn't sound right XD