corin the black fox

[Redwaller]

Awesome! Post soon!

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

i will!very soon *pushes up sleeves and puts glasses on* right, time for me to work!*takes off glasses* i don't need them...i don't even wear them   *writes corin and new book*




ahh...a break from writing can do a world of good.. )

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

okay!i have cap 6 almost finished, and  i'm making a new book that the first cap is finish so here's the link! --->   http://redwallabbey.com/forum/index.php?topic=2178.0

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

it'S HERE!!!!!! )

6

Outside, the sun shone brightly. However, inside the Warlord's tent, a storm was brewing.
"Lost?! LOST?!" Wellcane shrieked. "Off track? You pickle-pawed bottle-nosed lily-livered excuse for a Seer!"
The Seer cowered as the Warlord vented his spleen on her.
"I should skin you alive like I did that rat!" he snarled.
"Lord..." the Seer began placatingly.
"'Lord' nothing!" Wellcane snapped, raising his axe threateningly.
"But my Lord," Runso ventured, her sly mind turning furtively in an effort to mend the problem at hand. "I have recieved an omen."
Wellcane paused in his tirade, staring at her.
                                                                       
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Unknown to the Warlord, two figures were observing the camp.
A young hare with sandy-coloured fur chuckled. "Hmph! Well bucko, looks like we've got a spot o' vermin on the bloomin' offensive, wot!"
His companion, a lean, sharp-eyed Galloper, smiled dryly in agreement. He spoke with a thick highland brogue, "Aye, mate, and Ah bet mah auntie's pinnafore that his Lordship Ironclaw will be pleased tae see 'em."
"Pleased ye say, Raketam? I think his paws will burst his flippin' boots, wot wot!"
Raketam shifted restlessly, an insane battle light glittering in his eyes. "Well then, let's gae tae tell him, shall we?"
The sandy hare nodded. "Right-o, chap!"

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Farris and Rigon had their heads close together, whispering and laughing quietly. The kitchen door flew open as a young otter with a roguish grin on his face raced out. Friar Thomas came puffing after him, waving a ladle. "You young rip! Give me back my scones and tea!"
The otter, Aden, winked at the Friar. Farris and Rigon tried to hide their smiles.
"Sorry," Aden spread his paws innocently, gazing sorrowfully at the mouse-cook. "I ate them. But I'll tell you what; I'll help you in the kitchen all day, hmm?"
The Friar shook his head in mock despair. "You'll eat the Abbey out of house and home!"
Aden looked hurt. "Well then, sorry I couldn't be of help!" With a sly wink towards Farris and Rigon, he snatched the final scone that Friar Thomas was holding and fled.
Farris and Rigon burst out laughing when both creatures had gone.

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Corin sighed sadly. This was depressing. "Well," he commented drearily to a dove. "It looks like I'll be leaving here soon..."
The dove clucked, almost disappointedly, and took to the air. Corin sighed again. Was Farris somewhere in the Abbey, enjoying his time with his friends. Corin couldn't relate to that feeling. He was an outcast.




(this cap was just to let you guy catch up on whats happening in the story )
edit:they were a lot of typos so i fixed them up a little )

[MatthiasMan]

Is Rake Tam going to have any reference to Rakkety Tam?

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

Is Rake Tam going to have any reference to Rakkety Tam?

umm...his from the highlands, that's about it...(and his a hare not a squirrel(the only reason his in this book is because i love highland accents  (and his from the mountain )

[Redwaller]

Awesome Rake!

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

thanks!did you check out the victim? 

[Redwaller]

Not yet. I'm gonna have to take the time and read some Fanfics here.

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

the victim is on the forums here, is fanfic. but okay, hope you can tell me what you think of it soon  ^.^

Not yet. I'm gonna have to take the time and read some Fanfics here.

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

hey guys, I'm taking a one week break from writing, I've been writing like mad(on other stuff and corin and 'the victim') so yeah..that's it
P.S. Cap 7 will be up in a week too 

[MatthiasMan]

cool.

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

yup! ^.^ but i'm just going to chill at home. 
P.S. if you guys what to know something, just e-mail me.here's my e-mail. redwallfan101@gmail.com
okay see ya *poofs*

[MatthiasMan]

My email is zeldafox3ds@gmail.com.

[Captain Rake Nightfur]

okay, i'll sent you a test e-mail in a few minute  :  

My email is zeldafox3ds@gmail.com.