A Fanfic about... Pondicherry

[WarriorOfMossflower]

K, there are a few more IMPORTANT characters I've thought of.

Pondicherry--a huge venomous adder that dwells in an underwater cave in the Northlands. It has a long cherry-red strip running down the length of its body, and is known to drag beasts to their deaths in ponds.

Mhya--a young ottermaid of the Rogue Crew from the High North Coast

Lukkyley (Lukky, for short)-- a feisty Guosim shrewmaid dwelling in the Northlands

Swiffo Axehound II-- son of Ruggan Axehound, named for Ruggan's dead brother.

Myx Nightfur-- young black hare of the Long Patrol, grandson of Captain Rake Nightfur

[WarriorOfMossflower]

Chapter 3 finished.

[Flandor]

This is very well written great characters and a good plot.  Hope to read more!

[WarriorOfMossflower]

thanks, Flandor! You definitely will see more of this, and things will really start heating up when I get to book 2: Skaeterrar (you know how the redwall books typically have three book divisions...)
Anyhow, I really love writing about the Long Patrol and the Rogue Crew, so I tried to make chapter 3 my best. Now I'm off to write chapter 4--Redwall point of view. Check back in a day or so, I might be done with 4 and part of 5.

[WarriorOfMossflower]

Chapter 6 is finished!