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The Life of Leatho Shellhound

Started by WarriorOfMossflower, December 02, 2012, 09:43:50 PM

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WarriorOfMossflower

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Well, seeing as the deadline has been extended, I might as well get as much writing in as I can. Grazie, Leatho!

Chapter 4



Moonlight filtered through the forest as Leatho Shellhound trekked through the underbrush on his way to the gathering. He followed a small stream, comforted by its quiet rushing noise. He had released Tannel from the tree and buried her, but his heart still ached. An enormous weight had been forced upon his young shoulders, but he knew that he had to stay strong. Leatho planned to meet up with the other clans, devise a battle strategy, and drive away every wildcat that had ever set paw on Green Isle.
But that wasn't how it turned out at all.

At the gathering, many questions were asked. Much sympathy was offered. But not a single thing was done to help the situation. Leatho soon became exasperated with the elder otters of other clans. He was sitting off alone, trying to avoid attention, when another young otter approached him.
"Ahoy there, mate. I'm Kolun Galedeep."
Leatho looked up at him gloomily, making half an effort to judge how old he was. Kolun was very tall and had strong, broad shoulders. He looked much older than he actually was, Leatho learned later on.
"What's wrong, Leatho?"
"Besides the fact that my entire family was slaughtered and the other clans are doing nothing to help? Nothing at all," Leatho snapped. He immediately wished he could take back his words. "Sorry, Kolun. I'm just frustrated."
Kolun sat down beside him with a sad smile. "I know how ye feel, matey."
Leatho bit back a sharp retort and waited for him to continue.
"Sometimes the older otters just don't understand, that's all. I'm sure ye must have all kinds o' crazy war plans, but be patient and think 'em over before ye share 'em."
Leatho was silent for a long time. Now that he thought of it, his strategies for revenge did seem crazy and hastily thrown together. He stared at his paws and said quietly, "I know what you mean, but I still feel that we must take action soon."
The big otter stood and stretched, looking thoughtful. "Ye think that the wildcats might target the other clans, too?"

Unfinished chapter
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Shadowed One

I really like this story! Leatho was always my favorite character, and you did a great job with this fanfic. Can`t wait for more!
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Icefire

I can't wait to see where you take this! Great job!
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Calm in life and sound in reason,,
'Til evil arrives, a wicked horde,
Driving a warrior to pick up his sword,
The challenger rings then, straight and fair,
Justice is with us, beware. Beware!

winifred

This is amazing!!!!! I love your story! Good job please continue so we can read the rest!!!!!!!
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Leatho Shellhound

Good job! Can't wait for more!!! The illustrations are a nice touch to your great writing.  ;)
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Brinty

Awesome book!   ;D cant wait to hear more!   :)
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Jukka the Sling

This is amazing!!! Is WarriorOfMossflower on here anymore? 'Cause I'd really love to read the rest!
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