My Story About Romsca

[Romsca]

Please give me any suggestions you might have about her back story, please

[WarriorOfMossflower]

Maybe you could talk about how she came to be a pirate--her past and everything. Was her family massacred, causing her to turn bitter? Did she have any pirating adventures before serving under Ublaz Madeyes?

[Leatho Shellhound]

Or  maybe a nice woodland cared for her as a child, and then died or some thing. thats why she saved the Abbot.

[Skyblade]

I don't have any details, but I suggest adding emotion (maybe somebody close to her died, or she got betrayed) and a nice twist to the story. Also, to make sure she isn't too good or too bad-keep to her personality.  I look forward to reading what you've got in store for us.

[Romsca]

I have some ideas but they would probably be too rough or unpleasant or inappropriate to be included in a story about a Redwall character

[Skyblade]

If they're too violent you can omit them or make them less gory somehow. The Redwall series does have some gruesome scenes but you're right, we don't want to post unpleasant stuff here.

[Romsca]

If they're too violent you can omit them or make them less gory somehow. The Redwall series does have some gruesome scenes but you're right, we don't want to post unpleasant stuff here.

Good idea but how? Sorry, i haven't written much more than english papers and such. I tried writing a redwall story before with a little less violence than i had in mind but someone who read it still said it was too violent 

[Skyblade]

Aw, that's too bad. Well you can just not go into detail when descirbing any battle scenes, so don't show any blood, guts, or other gore. And not make any love scenes intense.

[Romsca]

I'm going to start soon but should it start with her parents before she was born or her as a little kid?

Could I please have a few more voters before starting to write?

[Kitsune]

I'm going to start soon but should it start with her parents before she was born or her as a little kid?

Could I please have a few more voters before starting to write?

I said in your earlier topic that I had already told you all my ideas..... but I still think that it should start with her parents. That would make good background(maybe) to why she turned mean.

[Romsca]

Thanks a lot for the votes but I agree with PluggFiretail. I will probably have something up here by the end of the year

[Skyblade]

It will be in Romsca's point of view, right?

[Romsca]

Yes, absolutely

[Tam and Martin]

Her as a baby

[Romsca]

I'll think about it