Crossed Swords Plotting: BloodSpine Crew

Started by BrookSkimmer, February 27, 2013, 11:43:32 PM

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Mattio

Hmmmm romsca wanna make it so Skral dislikes your charrie

BrookSkimmer

Plotting to kill each others characters is totally fine. It develops characters so its all good

Romsca


BloodGullet

#48
Yar Har!  now we're talkin'!  some good ol' back-stabbin' and double-crossin' pirate-style.  of course, if anyone's seen Golfar's description, she's out lookin' for some beast that she suspects is someone from her past, so could be anyone, and then .....  :P  (she sings in her head ....making a list, checking it twice, gonna find out who to put on ice.....)
When ye hear me muzzle lock, say yer prayers, ye bilgerat!

Mattio


DanielofRedwall

#50
Just so you know... I don't think Visefang would be the kind of character who'd be easily manipulated, and I don't even think he'd have an advisor considering he pretty much thinks "my way is the only way". I don't mind having a group of highly ranking generals and such as I said, but I'm not sure Visefang would be the kind of person who'd have a personal advisor. I don't mind the seer as I said, as he'd react much like Razzid from The Rogue Crew. I do like the idea of people plotting to kill me though. ;)

And Mattio, I'd like it if you could draw it up. I'll send you a pm of my basic outline just to give you an idea of what I'd like, and then I'll let you make it look much better than I ever could. ;) I'll probably just do it on paint, much easier that way.
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Mattio

ok cool and I was thinking that too Daniel. I just don't think he's the easily manipulated type

HeadInAnotherGalaxy

May'apz 'e 'az anger izzuez za' the crev can play off o'.
NARDOLE; You are completely out of your mind!
DOCTOR: How is that news to anyone?

"I am Yomin Carr, the harbinger of doom. I am the beginning of the end of your people!" -Yomin Carr

-Sometime later, the second mate was unexpectedly rescued by the subplot, which had been trailing a bit behind the boat (and the plot). The whole story moved along.

321tumbler

I think that the tending a wound idea is great, but how would he have gotten the wound?

HeadInAnotherGalaxy

NARDOLE; You are completely out of your mind!
DOCTOR: How is that news to anyone?

"I am Yomin Carr, the harbinger of doom. I am the beginning of the end of your people!" -Yomin Carr

-Sometime later, the second mate was unexpectedly rescued by the subplot, which had been trailing a bit behind the boat (and the plot). The whole story moved along.

Romsca

It's the otters. It says so in the character listing

321tumbler


BloodGullet

so, can we set up the first conflict? maybe they are all in the captain's cabin looking at the map and Golfar is pointing to some cove on the coast as a safe place to go because of the oncoming storm, but someone else, Skral (?) is arguing to ignore the storm and just prepare for an attack on the caves of the woodland creatures.  meanwhile Visefang is listening while having his wounds treated, very annoyed at the whole noise of it and quickly losing patience, the pain of being "treated" not helping .....  (plot teaser -- Skral is one of the beasts Golfar suspects of being on another pirate ship about 15 to 17 seasons ago,  or could it be Visefang himself .... hmmm, time will tell).

thoughts?
When ye hear me muzzle lock, say yer prayers, ye bilgerat!

Romsca

Good idea...my character's going to agree with Skral simply because she's too young (and naïve and stupid  :P) to be worried about a storm

321tumbler

I like the idea. Maybe I can to some kinda of "magic" to figure it out.