Crossed Swords Plotting: Round 2 (For BloodSpine crew and Swords of Freedom)

[Ceteruler]

Icefire: MArcus will inform them.

Brookskimmer: Where should Marcus be posting, in the combined thread or the SoF thread?

[BrookSkimmer]

In the combined thread please.

[Ceteruler]

ah, thank you. ^_^

edit: must say I rather got into writing the last post. Quite enjoyable.

[Icefire]

Thank you! I can play off of that! Confusion over!
I do understand the changes and they don't even really change much for my character.....I am still going to miss seeing the squirrel-napping, though.
@dannflorreguba: You could go into detail on Xbalantie's (twisted) enjoyment of watching the destruction caused by her handiwork.....and then when enough damage has been done she can go on the hunt for more skins to wear.......just a thought.

[Dannflower Reguba]

So.... Are rainshadow and I going to end up doing a flashback to the capture at some point? Because that will COMPLETELY change how I'm playing my character, because I had some plans going on for that that would change my play style kind of drastically. (even if the flashback happens outside of the tournament.)

[Tam and Martin]

I just wanted to make sure, I posted a warcry in my most recent post and I wanted to make sure it was alright.

[BrookSkimmer]

@Tam and Martin: Yep, the war cry is fine thanks for askin'!

Good job posting you guys!!! Thanks for moving forward even though the plot is changed. Your posts are looking great

[Icefire]

So...we are engaging in battle this round? I thought we were waiting until next round...

[Dannflower Reguba]

Brookskimmer okay-ed fighting. 

Also, just a little tip, check your posts in Word, because I did that and there aren't any more grammar errors. 

[BrookSkimmer]

Sure, you can fight some if you want. Just be aware I'll be matching you guys up for Round 3...

[Icefire]

Ok, that confused me. I get it now.

To add to Dan's comment, proofread your posts, check them on Word, and then proofread them again. Even Word misses some things. For example, it typically won't catch the difference between "targets" and "target's."

@Warrior: Just saying, I love the poem!

[BloodGullet]

@dannflorreguba - thanks for the idea about the boat getting hit!  great story for my character.  I had mentioned that she got in the last boat and then you said you hit the last boat so, cool, helps me in developing my little side plot.  

btw - is it day or night at the coast?? sorry if its obvious to you all, but I think I missed it somewhere,  may help in our descriptions of the environment  - anyway, cheers!

[Dannflower Reguba]

I specified a boat? oops.  Your welcome I guess? 

Ok, that confused me. I get it now.

To add to Dan's comment, proofread your posts, check them on Word, and then proofread them again. Even Word misses some things. For example, it typically won't catch the difference between "targets" and "target's."

@Warrior: Just saying, I love the poem!

Isn't that a difference between possessive and plural forms? Out of curiosity, why did you use the word "targets" as an example. (suspicious smiley)

[Leatho Shellhound]

Sorry every one for not posting, I'm really behind.

Isn't that a difference between possessive and plural forms? Out of curiosity, why did you use the word "targets" as an example. (suspicious smiley)

B/c it has to do with her sheild.

[Icefire]

I specified a boat? oops.  Your welcome I guess? 

Ok, that confused me. I get it now.

To add to Dan's comment, proofread your posts, check them on Word, and then proofread them again. Even Word misses some things. For example, it typically won't catch the difference between "targets" and "target's."

@Warrior: Just saying, I love the poem!

Isn't that a difference between possessive and plural forms? Out of curiosity, why did you use the word "targets" as an example. (suspicious smiley)

Yes, that is a difference between possessive and plural.
As to why target......oh, no reason......
Btw, have you read the second to last sentence of the last paragraph of your last post recently?