Final Scores and Results for Crossed Swords!

[BrookSkimmer]

Sorry this is long overdue... but I finally got a break in my work schedule to post the final results. You all did a fabulous job. There has been so much improvement in writing skills during this tournament! It's so great to see! And now... *drum roll*

Congratulations to our Grand Champions:
Icefire playing Liv Aegis
and
WarriorOfMossflower playing Sora Shirosaki

Our First Runners up:
Ceteruler playing Marcus
and
Rainshadow playing Spera

Our Second Runner up:
W0NWILL playing Nevfae

Liv Aegis: 96
Sora Shirosaki: 96
Marcus: 94
Spera: 94
Nevfae: 93
Golfar the Veil: 90
Xbalantie: 89
Vannøyne: 83
Vela Menkar : 77
Gavin-Asher: 77
Navarre: 75
Sculrig: 76
Farril: 74
Frost
Carr Marsh
Sula Grillet
Grollo Carento
Skral Kodzar


Sculrig, played by Tam and Martin

Description: Good detail, well written, some good descriptions. 3
Plot Movement: Not bad, though nothing spectacular. 2
SPAG: A few minor typos and spelling and grammar errors. 2
Overall: Solid posting. 2

I've never seen such marked improvement in writing so quickly! Great job!

Internal Dialogue
3
Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3 (a few small errors throughout)

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 27
Grand Total:

Gavin-Asher, played by Redwaller

Description: Very nice detail, nice posting. 3
Plot Movement: Moved the plot along nicely. 3
SPAG: Nothing too major, but remember to start a new line each time a new character speaks. 2
Overall: Very good posting. 3

Just really great is all I can say! So much improvement here!

Internal Dialogue

Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 26
Grand Total:

Navarre, played by Romsca

Description: Good description and detail. 3
Plot Movement: While it was detailed, not all of it was entirely necessary to the plot (the part with the rat). 2
SPAG: No errors. 3
Overall: Solid. 2

I really like what you did here.

Internal Dialogue

Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3


Total: 25
Grand Total:

Farril, played by Plugg Firetail

Description: Nice detail and description. 3
Plot Movement: Moved plot along well, a good read. 3
SPAG: No problems here. 3
Overall: Very nice. 3

I like how you laid everything out. I could imagine your scene quite well.

Internal Dialogue

Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total:27
Grand Total:

Vela, played by 321tumbler

(Note: No posts were marked for judging, I went for the 2 posts made.)
Description: Very good description and detail in the first post, the second lacked a little. 2
Plot Movement: The character's back story was touching and the posts moved along well. 3
SPAG: A couple of minor typos and grammar errors. 2
Overall: Solid. 2

Loved it. Loved the story in the first post!

Internal Dialogue

Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 24
Grand Total:

Golfar, played by BloodGullet

Description: Very nice descriptions, good imagery. 3
Plot Movement: Moves plot along well, included other character. 3
SPAG: A few minor errors. 2
Overall: Very good posting. 3
I am totally impressed!

Internal Dialogue

Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 26
Grand Total:

Nevfae, played by W0NWILL

Description: Great imagery and descriptions. 3
Plot Movement: Moves it along well. 3
SPAG: No problems. 3
Overall: A pleasure to read. 3

Loved it and really liked your character!

Internal Dialogue
Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 27
Grand total:

Spera, played by Rainshadow

Description: Very good detail and description, touching. 3
Plot Movement: Moves the plot along very well. 3
SPAG: No errors. 3
Overall: Excellent. 3

I really enjoyed this!

Internal Dialogue
Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 27
Grand total:

Frost> Eliminated due to lack of posts in final round.

Sora, played by WarriorOfMossflower

Description: Fantastic descriptions and detail. Touching. 3
Plot Movement: Moves the plot along well. 3
SPAG: No problems. 3
Overall: Fantastic posting. 3

Internal Dialogue

Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 27
Grand total:

Liv Aegis, played by Icefire

Description: Terrific description and detail, solid posting. 3
Plot Movement: Moves it along very well. 3
SPAG: No worries here. 3
Overall: Great posting as always. 3

Internal Dialogue
3
Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 27
Grand total:

Xbalantie, played by Danflorreguba
Description: Very nice descriptions, but could have been a little bit more detailed. 2
Plot Movement: All well and good here. 3
SPAG: Nope, no errors. 3
Overall: Solid posting. 3

Internal Dialogue
3
Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
3

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 26
Grand total:

Vannøyne, played by Leatho Shellhound

Description: I liked how you had him go to the fallen Swords, quite touching. Perhaps a bit more detail though. 2
Plot Movement: Good inclusion of others. 3
SPAG: A couple of minor errors. 2
Overall: Very nice posting. 3

Internal Dialogue
3
Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
2

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 24
Grand total:

Marcus, played by Ceteruler

(Note: No posts were marked for judging, so judged the first 2 posts).
Description: Great posting, very good description and detail. 3
Plot Movement: Moved along well. 3
SPAG: No worries. 3
Overall: Excellent. 3

Internal Dialogue
3
Creativity
3
Character development
3
SPAG
2

Character Interaction

Description
3
Plot movement
3

Total: 26
Grand total: