Not Everything's Perfect RP (OOC)

[Cornflower MM]

Okay, thanks! So, I changed Arya's Rank to "Slave going to the mountain" Is that what you meant?

[Amarith Waterspring]

yes! thank you.

[Amarith Waterspring]

I reset the poll. Please vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Cornflower MM]

Voted. You're welcome! And, Ami, you could always Modify a previous post, instead of double-posting all the time.

[Amarith Waterspring]

I reset again.....please vote again......

[Cornflower MM]

Will do. Again.

[Amarith Waterspring]

I made a new character and edited my first post, just so you know.

[The Skarzs]

You still accepting?

[Cornflower MM]

Um, Skarzs, we need people. So, yeah, probably.

[The Skarzs]

Shweet.
Amarith, I'm going to make another slave; a very dangerous one.
Please tell me if it isn't alright.

Name: Vargha
Gender: Male
Species: Wildcat (changed due to foreign creatures not allowed)
Age: 24
Appearance: Brown and black-striped fur, with gaps from countless scars. One scar cuts right down the right side of his face, discoloring his eye; one is blue, the other a  red. He has metal studs mounted in his paws permanently.
Weapon: Used to use an axe, but now he uses anything he can lay his paw on.
Rank: Slave
Personality: Dark. He sees no joy in anything. He only wishes to be left alone, and kill those who would do evil. His laws are twisted by his own tortured mind.
History: Vargha's parents were killed, and he was beaten as a young creature by their killers. This traumatic experience left a permanent mark on him. He has wandered around literally looking for trouble to put an end to. He was ambushed and trapped by Mintagerun, and kept as a prize, bound by many strong chains and kept beaten into submission.

Hope this edit works.

[Amarith Waterspring]

Thats fine, but one question. Is the ever a cougar in redwall? If not please change it to something that is, and not a good wildcat because those are bad.   Also I need to know if the slave is with the horde or not (please be with, please be with!).

[Sparks of Southsward]

Name:Julian Taurisan Longears                     
Gender:Male
Species:Hare
Age:30
Appearance:An average built hare with a brown coat, no bob-tail, just a stump and white eartips, he isnt caught not wearing his worn brown campaign uniform
Weapon:Badger crafted Poleaxe, in addition to a buckler shield and short sword.
Rank: Sergeant-Arms Master
Personality: A real stickler for the rules, a hare that is used to the aspect of combat. He is kind to his brothers and sisters in arms but also can be grim and to the point.
History (optional):A long time member of the long patrol, this hare is now serving the badger lady in a time of relative peace and calmness
Other:

[The Skarzs]

See, I wasn't sure if you minded foreign creatures being introduced. No, there was never a cougar in Redwall, so I'll change it at your request.

It's edited.

[Amarith Waterspring]

Julian is accepted Sparks.

Skarzs, Where is your slave? With the horde or going to Salamandastron?

[The Skarzs]

Sorry, the way you posted after my character sheet confused me a bit.
First: is it okay if he is a slave with the horde?
And second: you said 'no good wildcat' pretty much; he's neutral. That okay?