Strangers at Redwall (crackfic) - Winner of the RAFF Atypical Award!

Rainshadow · February 17, 2015, 07:03:50 PM

Okay, I'm really enjoying this. The whole thing with Skarzsy-chan and Lilianna is hilarious.

The Skarzs · February 17, 2015, 07:04:38 PM

Yup.

Faiyloe · February 17, 2015, 08:55:51 PM

Oh my gosh, that was so awesome, and yes I did find the whole thing with Skarzs and Lillianna hilarious.

If she tries anything can I punch her in that overly perfect nose of hers.

or hit her with a frying pan or something.

The Skarzs · February 17, 2015, 09:08:39 PM

Or just see how my bluntness messes it up.

Lady Amber · February 18, 2015, 02:29:54 AM

Awesome, Jukka! Can't wait to see what happens next, especially with Lilianna and Skarzs!

Delthion · February 18, 2015, 03:55:37 AM

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!

James Gryphon · February 18, 2015, 04:00:57 AM

Not bad. The one thing that I might see becoming a problem is the cliche of having your deliberate Mary Sue turn into a manipulative villain. It's been done, and anyway, that means the character isn't really a true Sue. It would be more in character to have her do something dramatic, trying to save the heroes' lives and win Skarzs' affections, die, and be mourned by all (except for him).

The Skarzs · February 18, 2015, 06:02:45 AM

Eh, let's see how it turns out anyways.

Lady Ashenwyte · February 18, 2015, 11:57:59 AM

Maska and Masko. This is amazing.

Mhera · February 18, 2015, 02:49:41 PM

Okay, this is a really funny story

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Søren · February 18, 2015, 05:07:52 PM

That was really funny! It's was much better then the previous chapters, IMHO.
I like the Skarz-Liliannna things you got going. Funny, as I was reading chapter four I was wondering if you were going to throw that stuff in.
I like my charicter too.

LT Sandpaw · February 18, 2015, 06:19:50 PM

This is great, funny how your getting all the personalities correct excellent job. Also do you know how many members you are going to add? Or is that it?

Delthion · February 19, 2015, 03:28:29 AM

I DEMAND MORE LINES!!!

No, but it would be nice to be mentioned in the story just a bit more...

Søren · February 19, 2015, 05:06:04 PM

Quote from: Delthion on February 19, 2015, 03:28:29 AM
I DEMAND MORE LINES!!! No, but it would be nice to be mentioned in the story just a bit more...

Dude, you got like the second biggest iner-forum-member story lines. If you count Skarz and that squrril girl inter-forum-member.

Captain Tammo · February 19, 2015, 10:10:42 PM

OMG THIS IS HILARIOUS I LOVE IT

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Strangers at Redwall (crackfic) - Winner of the RAFF Atypical Award!