Unnatural

[Dannflower Reguba]

OOC: He's conscious again.

[Unimaginative]

OOC: Oops, fixed.

[Lady Ashenwyte]

OOC: I've changed it.

[Faiyloe]

OOC: That is better. As a note Most people do not sate so bluntly their intentions or suspicions especialy when they are bad ones. For example "Eh, you look to be a magic beast, you better come with me." would just be shortened to "Come with me," before he drags her off and beats her up in a back alleyway or something (more like get the living day lights knocked out of him by Bane). If you are trying to portray and idea, in this case the fact that she is being suspected of magic, then instead of just stating it out loud, you can use indirect hinting, you can state Banes thoughts on the matter or even Ayashe's to hint at the soldiers possible intentions (remember not all of the soldiers are motivated by promotion, for some it is loyalty to the crown, others is money, personal pleasures, or even just a bit of "fun"). Another example "I've come to question you,"  Is a little robotic, instead try "I am going to have to ask you a few questions," which is more natural. You don't have to change it. Just something you should keep in mind for the future.

[The Skarzs]

"Oh, I don't know, maybe, right when I was nearly hacked to pieces by your soldiers," Haenrok growled to the ermine. "Open up the door and let's see if you want to see it happen again," he dared.

[Izeroth]

 "Do you take me for an utter fool?" Erich asked. "I know why you were arrested: you ran from royal soldiers. You knew this was illegal, and yet you act as if we did something wrong. The officer who was there has informed me that you forcefully tried to resist arrest, even lobbing stones at them."

[Unimaginative]

Rangi had, after cleaning up the battle by throwing all the remaining corpses into bushes, had returned to Sylest. The massive otter wandered the streets aimlessly, drawing odd looks because of his size and tattoos.

[LT Sandpaw]

The two frog marched Sven straight too the dungeons and were very close before he stopped walking all together. He clanked his chains and steadied himself stumbling the two guards.

"Hey keep movin!" Yelled the weasel  fumbling to pull his sword free while keeping a paw on Sven's shoulder. The rat who was equipped with a spear moved a pace away ready to attack should Sven try anything.

"Move prisoner, an don't try anything see." The rat grunted leveling his weapon. Sven showed the his paws still bound by the chains.

"Even if I wanted too I couldn't because of these." The chains unhooked from his paws and fell to the ground with a slight clang. "Well would you look at that?"

The rat charged and Sven dodged kicking the other rodents paws out from under him sending his head crashing to the hard stone floor killing him. The weasel was about to yell when Sven jumped on him, twisting the weasels neck so he couldn't yell out. Kicking the sword from his paws Sven began choking the life from his opponent.

They struggled silently for a few minutes Sven holding tightly while the weasel kicked franticly unable to breath. Slowly his movements slowed before stopping all together. Sven waited ten more seconds before pushing the weasels body away. Standing he retrieved the sword and the keys to the cells with a grunt of satisfaction he replaced a small lock pick into his hidden pocket on his tunic.

"Welp thanks for showing me the way." Taking the rats armor he dressed himself like a guard hiding the two deceased in a nearby closet. Knowing they wouldn't remained hidden for long he marched confidently down too the prison in slightly too big armor. Approaching the prison guard with a swagger he had seen the other soldiers preforming.

[Izeroth]

OOC: The prison guards don't just let random soldiers enter. You'd have to have a very good reason.

[LT Sandpaw]

OOC: I assume your still controlling the prison guard

[Izeroth]

OOC: I am? Ok then...

"What's yer business 'ere?" Asked the prison guard.

[Jetthebinturong]

OOC: Anyone got any ideas as to how I could come in?

[Izeroth]

OOC: You could meet up with the group from the forest.

[The Skarzs]

"I'm a foreigner!" cried Haenrok. "I know nothing of the rules of this land, and I did not throw stones at anybeast!" The sea otter turned away, disgusted; he was done speaking to this soldier, even if the other didn't share his mentality.

[LT Sandpaw]

"My business here?" Sven shrugged, leaning close to the guard. "Have you see any magic? I hear it's something to behold." Sven gestured mysteriously towards the door. "Maybe you could let me an you go take a quick peek." Sven suggested winking.