Redwall Isn't Safe Anymore! (Is Redwall as Safe as they Say it is? Part Two) OOC

[Ashleg]

@LT Sandpaw

C'mon, mate...

[Ashleg]

WHY AM I HAVING TO DO THIS?

Heeeey Fardan....

[Hickory]

Hi.

[James Gryphon]

Is Fang not mute?

[Ashleg]

No, it hurts though he talked before with Mortembell.

[Ashleg]

Oh @Sagetip !!
I just remembered you owned the Friar (Rusk) and his assistant.
If after Sand posts you could get him ready, that would be 10/10.

[Hickory]

K.

[Ashleg]

Holy Macaron, the Vigil is dead.

[James Gryphon]

It's good overall. My only concern is that I'm not sure it's especially clear what they're voting on (to disband the Vigil?), particularly at first. It's not a showstopper, just something to think about.

[Groddil]

It's good overall. My only concern is that I'm not sure it's especially clear what they're voting on (to disband the Vigil?), particularly at first. It's not a showstopper, just something to think about.

I tried to make it seem a bit vague at first, although it does need some way of letting you know what's going on at first.

[Hickory]

@Ashleg: Now?

[Ashleg]

I have to hear from Fardan first, then he can come.
I'll set it up for you.

[Hickory]

No, for Rusk.

[Ashleg]

Yeah, I need Fardan to reply first so I can have Alfhild get Rusk.

[LT Sandpaw]

Hey Ashes there was just something I wanted to ask, and also remind you off.

Could Brack and Ros begin a sort of friendship, that we build up as the story continues? I think it would be kinda cool if Brack breaks from his stupor because of the weasel. We could make it gradual, and strained, but overall a they grow into good friends. However that's entirely up to you.

Also, keep in mind Grah the Krah is still furious at Rapshade, and has it out for Fangfang, so when they go outside, that could become a problem for everyone's favorite rat and ferret duo.

Anyway that's it.


Hey Grodds, you kinda killed your main character, so I'm just wondering if you're going to make Shadomay your new main character? If so, and I don't remember her last location, but if she was captured with the rest of the Redwallers I could post with Aver in the cellars, so you can use her, if you want.