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[Dannflower Reguba]

       I was just trying to get people to admit I was as insane as the rest of them, you can be nuts and level-headed at the same time.... Kinda... But still! Never said I was a dibbun  That'd be my brothers.

[Faiyloe]

Be careful what you wish for. And teasing is childish.

[Lady Amber]

This is great, Gonff! I thought this part was especially funny, seeing as Russa and I are the assistants:

However, it did get risky when they almost ran into Groddil and his assistants (Who each had a grasp on one of his arms, twisting him around while he pleaded for help)...

I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter!

[Wylder Treejumper]

Very good, Gonff, very good! I really enjoyed the "Cellarbration". Though, think it may be premature to say Søren and V's destiny is marriage...

Just a tip for those spelling and grammar mistakes: Print it and read it aloud to someone. You tend to catch things you miss on a computer when you do.

[Jukka the Sling]

Awesome, Gonff!  I love your poem, and Wylder's, and the fact that I was telling everyone about my idea for a better school (), and how everyone cried about Soren and his lady except James, who had to keep up appearances.  Too funny!

[Groddil]

This is great, Gonff! I thought this part was especially funny, seeing as Russa and I are the assistants:

However, it did get risky when they almost ran into Groddil and his assistants (Who each had a grasp on one of his arms, twisting him around while he pleaded for help)...

I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter!

^ THIS. Seriously, this is EXACTLY how I envisaged this happening, and a kudos for that. ^

[Rainshadow]

  I really enjoyed this chapter!    I thought the poems were quite nice, and I love the fact that the only mention of me is just that I'm looking for Leatgo (and then dancing with him).  xD  Though I do have one small complaint as to my characterization:  You said that Leatgo and I put on a spectacular show of dancing, but in reality I can't dance anything other than the most basic of swing dancing.    I DEMAND THAT THIS BE CHANGED IMMEDIATELY BECAUSE I AM ABSOLUTELY OFFENDED THAT YOU CHARACTERIZED ME INCORRECTLY; HOW DARE YOU DO THAT?!

 

  As for the story itself, I'm very invested in it.  I have one theory as to where the plot might go, but I'd rather not say in case I'm horribly wrong.    Keep it up, though!  I wanna see if my theory's correct. 

[rachel25]

Loved this chapter. I was smiling for the whole thing, especially the part about me being interested in Soren's love life.  and also the dancing, just all in all wonderful. Can't wait for more.
Though as Skarzs mentioned, there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes but I do it as well.  But his suggestion about how you write your speech would help a great deal, having the action after the talking and next to it would help, and a little more action along with the talking would just fill in blind spots is all.

[Wylder Treejumper]

Awesome, Gonff!  I love your poem, and Wylder's, and the fact that I was telling everyone about my idea for a better school (), and how everyone cried about Soren and his lady except James, who had to keep up appearances.  Too funny!

Also: I don't cry- and I would probably rather go and wash greasy pots than listen to Soren talk about V

[Aimless Gallivanter]

This is fantastic, and I can't wait to read more

You're description of me being disheveled is very accurate haha.
(Did you use redwall-lyrics to find the poem I read? How did the website treat you? was it easy to use? Did you have any problems with it?)

[Skyblade]

In real life, taking care of dibbuns would not be my thing Guess I underestimated the harsh work of a badgermum!

Good chapter, Gonff, and I'm excited for the next. Strive to give everyone a chance under the spotlight.

[Jukka the Sling]

Awesome, Gonff!  I love your poem, and Wylder's, and the fact that I was telling everyone about my idea for a better school (), and how everyone cried about Soren and his lady except James, who had to keep up appearances.  Too funny!

Also: I don't cry- and I would probably rather go and wash greasy pots than listen to Soren talk about V

Actually, I don't think I'd cry about Soren and V in real life either.   It's still really funny, though.

Also, your post is gold.

[Lady Ashenwyte]

I really like this one. Of course, was probably crying of laughter when Soren told us tales of him and his lady. I have no emotions.

This was awesome, I agree whole heatedly on the comment on Dan being a dibbun XD And I love how you had me and Daskar fighting.  and I like how Leagto intervened. Love the ester eggs too. Seriously though Ash stole our Insane asylum! 

We shall get it back, in time. For some reason one more thing I would have liked to see, or rather, liked to have not seen, was your nudge to the events that will come after that chapter.

NEVARRRRRRRRRRRRRR.

[rachel25]

The only times that I cry is when I'm ill and vulnerable and watching epic films. 

[LT Sandpaw]

Yeah whatever. Ya'll were in tears, I could hear the sobbing from here.