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Does anyone know of a Redwall and Pokemon crossover

Started by rrrrr, May 01, 2015, 03:46:24 AM

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rrrrr

Have you guys seen a Redwall and Pokemon crossover? That would be very cool :D
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Gonff the Mousethief

I have not heard of such thing. I do know that there are a couple Sherlock/Pokemon things floating around somewhere.
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There should be... somewhere. Have you ever been on DeviantART? Pokèmon has been crossed over with pretty much EVERYTHING.
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rrrrr

I would like to do one but I question my dialogue-writing abilities, because I have an unusual affinity to write "he/she said" at the end of every dialogue.

There can be Pikachus everywhere!!! ;D
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I had shrimp 'n' hotroot soup today.


Edraithel

to mix it up you can use a description of the character, or call them by their name. Also instead of saying "said" you can say, "shouted, called, howled, cried, yelled, screeched, replied, answered, etc. Just switching it up with descriptive verbs will make it more interesting.
"A cage," she said. "To stay behind bars, until use and old age accept them, and all chance of doing great deeds is gone beyond recall or desire." - Eowyn, Lord of the Rings

"Listen for the destination in your heart if you lose sight of your path." D. Gray Man

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Ho arr, mateys, swimming is fun!

I had shrimp 'n' hotroot soup today.


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Wylder Treejumper

Also, using "said" a lot is not necessarily a bad thing. Using more descriptive verbs can distract from the dialogue. What I actually do most of the time is cut out all dialogue-verbs, and substitute actions of the character speaking instead. If you are a proficient writer, you can make conversations flow with no "said"s or descriptor verbs at all.
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The Skarzs

  Said is an invisible word, most of the time. If you use "growled", "moaned", "yelled", etc. too much, it brings the reader out of your world. Invisible is good, and a good writer shouldn't need to tell the reader how the character is saying something; the reader is smart enough to know if a character is angry. BJ often used action to denote who was speaking, rather than a dialogue tag.
  You don't need "he said" behind everything; use it before or in the middle on occasion, and if you have two characters talking for a while, the tags aren't always necessary. The way they speak can be unique to a character, so that adds to the ease with which they can be determined.
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