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Started by Gonff the Mousethief, April 06, 2016, 10:14:31 PM

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James Gryphon

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Quote from: Gonff the Mousethief on August 13, 2016, 02:19:39 AM
say, I wish you and Russa could be sisters in the story, because there are so many times I wish to use 'the sisters' instead of 'The otter and the squirrel'. But oh well, gotta work with what you got!
Wait, they aren't? Why not?

They're all named after squirrels, so usually they're all cast as squirrels.
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Dannflower Reguba

       Different species I think, hence, "otter squirrel thing."
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James Gryphon

Well yeah, but why are they different species?
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Lady Ashenwyte

Quote from: James Gryphon on August 22, 2016, 03:41:25 AM
Well yeah, but why are they different species?

I thought they were both squirrels.
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Skyblade

Good plot twist. It's thoughtful of you to write this for the forum.

Thanks, MatthiasMan, for the avatar!

Lady Amber

Quote from: James Gryphon on August 22, 2016, 03:41:25 AM
Well yeah, but why are they different species?
When Gonff first started writing the fanfic, he had that character sheet that we all filled out; I put myself as an otter and Russa put herself as a squirrel. Jukka is something else, I think, but I can't remember what.

Faiyloe

I believe she was a ferret. You could be adopted siblings. I have an otter that is brothers with a squirrel in the Gadna story.
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@Gonff the Mousethief Do you think the next chapter will be done soon?
                    

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rachel25

That got dark fast.  :P Good chapters, the description is good and the overall feeling of loss. However, it might just be because I have a tiny screen, but I'm finding it quite hard to read the dialogue. Would you be able to do another paragraph jump between them please?

Side note, this song fits what's just happened. (Ignore video)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jGc7vNBRAYk&index=94&list=LLC-airPNzuI_GJbPIFVwoCw

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