The Never-Ending Labyrinth At The Bottom Of The Cellars

[lass of something much]

just...cheese...

[Kade Rivok]

Excuse me, it was a swimming hole.  Wrong term.  EVEN SO.

[lass of something much]

>_<

[Ebantu the Kararehe]

I still have nothing to tell you.

[lass of something much]

she knows nothing of it Rivok.

[Kade Rivok]

You don't know that, much.

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A fic where Redwall and Salamandastron are in danger - two sieges for the price of one.



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Welcome to #the-dark-empire!
This is the start of the #the-dark-empire channel. A fic where Redwall and Salamandastron are in danger - two sieges for the price of one.

Waycaster03/10/2020
@AvengeThem have fun!
March 11, 2020

AvengeThem03/11/2020
Thanks
March 16, 2020

Keva StrongbowLast Monday at 8:53 AM
Hi, new member!
March 17, 2020

LassLast Tuesday at 4:42 PM
Ooo, who are you avenging?
March 18, 2020

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 12:57 AM
heh
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All the poor innocent vermin killed by murderous woodlanders
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I mean, boiling half of Cluny's army alive was...
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And they threw boulders on the other side of the tunnel so they couldn't escape...

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:02 AM
I know.
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I bet a fanfic about the gang pressed soldiers would be interesting.

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:03 AM
Probably

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:05 AM
Most definetly

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:07 AM
It's hard to make a "black and white" story, when some of the antagonists are forced against their will.

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:07 AM
very true

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:07 AM
But it is interesting. I wish it were more heavily utilized.

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:08 AM
Well I have something of that sort coming eventuaaaaally
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I suppose Deserters counts as well but Keldors slower than I am
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Havent read most of Dark Empire so wouldnt know

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:08 AM
So, all the vermin die in redwall? Does it mention any of the gang pressed going free?
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Alright.
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That's cool though Grey!

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:09 AM
A lot die in Redwall

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:09 AM
Captain Snow and Squire Gingivere kill all the poor vermin trying to escape the murderous woodlanders

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:09 AM
A couple ran out the abbey and were assaulted (read devoured) by a cat and an owl
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Im not sure if the wording was vague enough for there to plausibly be one or two survivors

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:10 AM
I'm guessing there was a few survivors

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:11 AM
Poor things.

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:11 AM
R.I.P.
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Though better than getting boiled alive

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:11 AM
Why did Brian make them gang pressed if they were all evil in the first place?
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True.

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:11 AM
Interesting question...

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:12 AM
Well the actual pressganging makes Cluny seem more evil
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So theres that

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:12 AM
Killconey didn't wish to join the army. He wanted to have peace. But his family was murdered and then he was killed by vicious Matthias

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:13 AM
Wow......
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That would be an awesome fic!

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:13 AM
Yes.
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Or just a drabbel
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drabble

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:14 AM
Drabble wouldn't be bad

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:14 AM
I have many planned for some vermin
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Specifically Groddil, Killconey, and a few others

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:14 AM
To be fair it was more Cluny who killed Killconey

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:14 AM
King Mortspear
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True

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:15 AM
Grabbed him and used him as a shield

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:15 AM
It could read like a straight forward drama tragedy, but would be darkly comedic cause the reader knows the context.
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You're right Grey.
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That's cool though! I'd love to read then avenge!

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:16 AM
Not as dark as being BOILED ALIVE
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And Constance smashes Fangburn against the wall countless times

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:17 AM
Ew I know.

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:17 AM
The Groddil drabble will be somewhat important to the Dark Empire

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:22 AM
i forget, who was Groddil

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:23 AM
High Magician to Ungatt Trunn.
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He killed his master

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:23 AM
Pushed him into the sea?

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:23 AM
yes

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:24 AM
Nice
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I like him

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:24 AM
So do I
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Though Trunn was one of the greatest villains, I liked Groddil more

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:25 AM
I always wished we had seen more of Verdauga

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:25 AM
So do I
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I have a plan for Mortspear, maybe I will do Verdauga

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:28 AM
Comparing Ungatt and Groddil is unfair for me though
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Im biased towards rats

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 1:28 AM
Neither are rats...

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Wednesday at 1:29 AM
Groddil isnt a rat?
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Oh fox same difference
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I think cats are my least favourite Redwall species by process of elimination
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Which, I guess, is a bit unfair on them(edited)

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:42 AM
Oh yes, I heard of the poor fox. He was sympathetic and won at the end.

WaycasterLast Wednesday at 1:42 AM
Sayna wrote about him.

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:42 AM
Oh that's cool!
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Her fanfic account is sayna as well yes?

WaycasterLast Wednesday at 1:43 AM
She doesn't really use FFN
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Go to Holt Rhulain for her.

abrahemLast Wednesday at 1:45 AM
Oh nice.
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I will.
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Sounds like a neat site.

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 11:18 AM
I will check it out

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 11:30 AM
So far it's more of after Trunn. He must be ancient! How he could make it all the way to Mossflower

WaycasterLast Wednesday at 11:30 AM
I don't understand. Care to paraphrase?

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 11:31 AM
Sayna's fan-fiction about Groddil

WaycasterLast Wednesday at 11:31 AM
Ah. Which one? There are so many...

abrahemLast Wednesday at 11:31 AM
Cool.

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 11:31 AM
Four Warriors cometh has him
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On Holt Rhulain, not FFN

WaycasterLast Wednesday at 11:32 AM
Ah. Yeah...
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She altered the timeline. Not a bad thing.

AvengeThemLast Wednesday at 11:32 AM
No
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Not a bad thing
March 19, 2020

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 1:41 AM
Of course, Groddil can use magic in her story

WaycasterLast Thursday at 1:41 AM
Lots of beasts can in hers. Or mine for that matter.

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 1:44 AM
Yeah, I noticed

WaycasterLast Thursday at 1:45 AM
Different systems and all that.

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 1:45 AM
Nobody can use magic at the present time in mine

WaycasterLast Thursday at 1:45 AM
Time travel!

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 1:46 AM
Heh
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Of course, I'd need magic to do that
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Kind of a paradox

WaycasterLast Thursday at 1:47 AM
I won't touch that in the near future. Things get out of paw quickly.

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 1:48 AM
Yes. Time travel can be very confusing

ArkosLast Thursday at 1:50 AM
If you think about it there is only one way it would work. I love talking about it because it is so simple

WaycasterLast Thursday at 1:50 AM
Oh?

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 1:50 AM
Hmm?

WaycasterLast Thursday at 1:52 AM



Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Thursday at 1:54 AM
There is one way it can work but its not exactly time travel

WaycasterLast Thursday at 1:54 AM
¿Qué?

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Thursday at 1:54 AM
And its more of a prank really
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Do what the Mayans did and end your calendar on a specific date
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Someone, somewhere will wind up thinking it's a doomsday date
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Boom, you've pranked the people of the future

abrahemLast Thursday at 1:59 AM
lol. True
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People were so dumb during 2012.

Your Theory Is IncorrectLast Thursday at 2:00 AM
They
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Are
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Still
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Dumb

abrahemLast Thursday at 2:01 AM
TASD.
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That needs to become an acronym.
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Because it's so true

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 4:59 AM
TASD. Nice

abrahemLast Thursday at 5:38 AM
Lol. Yep.

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 5:55 AM
They are still dumb

abrahemLast Thursday at 6:03 AM
Indeed

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 6:07 AM
True

AvengeThemLast Thursday at 8:20 AM
Chapter Thirteen is now out!
March 21, 2020

AvengeThemToday at 10:16 AM
Chapter Fourteen should be out!

not LassToday at 10:16 AM
Yay!

AvengeThemToday at 10:16 AM
I think

not LassToday at 10:17 AM
you work really fast!

AvengeThemToday at 10:17 AM
Yeah it's out. Thank you!
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I hope my quality's good though

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:27 AM
For a first fic its not bad

AvengeThemToday at 10:27 AM
Thank you
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What should I fix?

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:28 AM
Hmmm
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Thats hard to sat
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Say*
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Theres nothibg specifically that you do wrong

AvengeThemToday at 10:28 AM
Ah.

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:28 AM
But some of your scenes flow a bit too quickly
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And the plot/characters aren't all that special

AvengeThemToday at 10:29 AM
Ah. I'll work on that

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:29 AM
I think mostly what you should do is to continue doing what you are doing

AvengeThemToday at 10:29 AM
Okay
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But I will work on characters

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:30 AM
Hmmm
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Has Way asked you the question yet?
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The aspects of a story thing

AvengeThemToday at 10:30 AM
?

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:30 AM
Ill take that as a no
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So
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AT, in your story what do you put the most emphasis on?
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Plot, character or lore?

AvengeThemToday at 10:31 AM
Ah. I should probably find out the answer.
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Probably plot
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Then lore

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:32 AM
Id say the same
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Very few fics focus on lore mind
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And your characters arent bad
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Its just, for me at least, they need to compete against the multitudes of other characters I read/write about or else they shall be forgotten

AvengeThemToday at 10:34 AM
Ah.

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:34 AM
Its sort of like how most of the hares in the redwall books are interchangeable

AvengeThemToday at 10:35 AM
Stiffener and Nubbs Miggory are exactly the same

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:35 AM
Only a few of them really stand out
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Now
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Having two of the exact same type of character isnt a bad thing

AvengeThemToday at 10:36 AM
At least, not in the same book. Unless they're twins or something like that

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:36 AM
In fact it can help develop them if you use their similarities to highlight their differences

AvengeThemToday at 10:36 AM
True

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:37 AM
Take all Ì say with a grain of salt though
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Im no better than you when it comes to writing and I havent read-read half your story.

AvengeThemToday at 10:38 AM
Ah.

Your Theory Is IncorrectToday at 10:38 AM
Its merely where my opinions lie.

AvengeThemToday at 10:38 AM
Ah.

abrahemToday at 10:44 AM
Those are good tips Grey.

AvengeThemToday at 10:44 AM
Yes. Thank you

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AvengeThemToday at 12:07 PM
Chapter XV is now out! Second to last Redwall chapter for Book I, and Third to last chapter for Book I. Please Review, I probably made some mistakes!

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[Ebantu the Kararehe]

Lass, put that in a spoiler please.

Edit: Thank you.

[Verdauga]

Ninja'd.

[lass of something much]

Lass, put that in a spoiler please.

yes.

[Verdauga]

Why did you even post that?

[Ebantu the Kararehe]

To annoy Kade, I'm guessing.

[lass of something much]

Why did you even post that?

I didn't mean too...

[Verdauga]

Accidentally hit ctrl+v, I take it?

[Ebantu the Kararehe]