Poetry

[MatthiasMan]

The rules are simple. Make a tounge twister, riddle, or poem and someone has to find out what it means ( or just laugh )


I'll start



Brian Jaques is one smart dude,
He created the Redwall books,
but in those books I saw one flaw,
there were lots O' crooks.

To the top of the compass you travel,
no matter where you go,
you'll never find redwall,
unless you have the river's flow


Which do I travel?


N, S, E, W?

[MatthiasMan]

Tansy Pansy toogle doo,
Arven was so little too,
he was a maggot oh so mean
he just went to hurt vermin's slpeins

[Dannflor]

    redwall redwall redwall
     my brother sat on a lead hall
  he broke his leg
  now he is dead
  now he is in a coffin

[Dannflower Reguba]

Please tell me that is not a true poem?

As the shades of twilight
Fade from that beautiful hue 
Evening will turn to night
With its deep dark blue

[MatthiasMan]

Figure this out,
the answers is here,
inside this poem,
oh so dear.

Two paces south,
now turn east,
four paces forward,
make a line with oil or grease.

Turn to the start,
walk over there.
What shape does it make,
cause it's not a pear.


What shape do you make? Be specific.

[Dannflower Reguba]

An right angle triangle.

[MatthiasMan]

Correctly correct!
Couldn't be wronger,
From now on try to write in poetry,
to make it longer.

[redwallgurl]

this is one great
topic full of rhymes
i cant believe i came in soo late
now its time
for me to go
i hope ill see you soon
high or low

[Dannflor]

   No Dannflor pal it is not true

[MatthiasMan]

Is that a cutting line?
Tis very good for you,
I'm not insulting,
Just, your profile backround is blue.

[Trigoma]

In my wrath people tremble.
In my anger people cry.
In my destruction people suffer.
By my name, people die.

I actually wrote that...I have no clue what possessed me at the time.

[MatthiasMan]

Good job, good job.
I must proclaim,
it definately had the right aim.

Two pesos, two pesos,
what is that?
Is it two money, two youth, or just two fat?

[Dannflor]

      a cat sat on a bug

       his mistress thought it was a rug

            she died of shock
              or the cat threw a rock

                 and the cat ruined her mug

[MatthiasMan]

I'm confused,
it doesn't make sense.
Huh. Well,
I guess it is very dense.

[Dannflor]

   Yeah isn't it great
      I love to here about fate
      I eat pizza yesterday
       Now I am stuffed away
       but for breakfast I am late