My Story About Romsca

[Leatho Shellhound]

I'll think about it

Yes start it as her from a young age.

[Romsca]

It would be more complete though if the story started before she was born

[Redwaller]

I agree,  it would be interesting to have a background story, like how her parents met, what happened and all that.

[Romsca]

I agree,  it would be interesting to have a background story, like how her parents met, what happened and all that.

Thanks! But do you know how I can write that so all Redwall fans can read it, not just the older ones, if you know what I mean? 

[Redwaller]

Well, just don't go into details. Keep it simple.

[W0NWILL]

IDEA! Maybe she was saved and raised by woodlanders, like Veil, but she meets another ferret(maybe a love interest?) and is told about vermin and their stereotype. She runs away, shocked that her adopted parents hid that from her, becomes a corsair with that other ferret, the other ferret dies, and on the surface she becomes bad like any vermin, but her raising did have an effect on her, causing her to be compassionate and save the abbot's life.

I'm quite brilliant, if I do say so myself.

[Griffen]

little kids

[Romsca]

IDEA! Maybe she was saved and raised by woodlanders, like Veil, but she meets another ferret(maybe a love interest?) and is told about vermin and their stereotype. She runs away, shocked that her adopted parents hid that from her, becomes a corsair with that other ferret, the other ferret dies, and on the surface she becomes bad like any vermin, but her raising did have an effect on her, causing her to be compassionate and save the abbot's life.

I'm quite brilliant, if I do say so myself.

Good idea! But I already have a pretty complete idea, it's just putting it on paper (or the computer, in this case) Although I will think about it. I am open to any more ideas any of you might have.

@WONWILL: Here's a question: how come her parents weren't the ones taking care of her in the first place? Did they die? Did they abandon her? Did she run away? etc.

[Romsca]

IDEA! I thought of this a little while ago
Warning!!! It's not that good

Her dad loses his job, so he tries to find another one but can't so he becomes a corsair and takes his family with him (Romsca is about 5, she has a little brother who is probably about 2 or 3) The ship's captain is Barranca's father so Romcsa and Barranca became best friends. She and her family live on the island, her dad finds a job as a fisherman. He gets drunk once and says he doesn't like the government so the trident rats take him and beat him within an inch of his life. Romsca (Who's 8 ) throws a rock through the window of the trident rat barracks so Ublaz gets mad and has lizards publicly execute her father by hanging him by his hands (paws, i mean they're redwall animals) by letting the lizards eat him alive. Her mother dies because of an illness sometime later and her brother gets sent to an orphanage she never sees him again. She hides on a ship (bound for holt lutra) and hopes they don't kill her

I know, really bad grammar, but hey, it's a start

What does everyone think?

[Leatho Shellhound]

Um well, that's not quite what I was thinking, her family is really devided. But it might work.

[Redwaller]

I like the idea. But for the beginning, you could have a sort of romantic story without the details, and it all happens in Sampetra.

[Romsca]

Um well, that's not quite what I was thinking, her family is really devided. But it might work.

Well, what were you thinking?

[Kitsune]

Good idea, actually. At first, what happened to her father seems to violent, but then what would make her so mean as something like that and everyone she loves dies...   poor Romsca! I could DEFINITELY see that.

[Romsca]

Thanks... at least someone likes my idea

[Kitsune]

Your welcome!