Not Everything's Perfect RP (OOC)

[Amarith Waterspring]

This is my first RP so tell me if I'm doing anything wrong.
OK the plot is that there is an evil wandering horde master with a bunch of slaves he has gathered over the years. He has always watched Salamandastron and wanted it for himself. He knows that there isn't any firedragons in Salamandastron, but doesn't know what is in there. One day he sends a group of slaves to Salamandastron and sets up camp near it but out of sight so he can make sure that they don't run for it and not be seen. The slaves would come back with the Information and then he would attack Salamandaston many times. That's it.

Edit: Is that better WONWILL?

Edit: Please vote on what you think the title should be.

Sign up sheet:

Name:
Gender:
Species:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon:
Rank:
Personality:
History (optional):
Other:


Character Spaces:

Salamandastron Boy Fox horde leader ( 1 of 1 taken )
Slaves going to Salamandastron ( 3 of 5 taken)
Slaves with the horde (always open) (1 taken)
Badger lord/lady (1 of 1 taken)
Salamandastron Hare (always open) (2 taken)
Horde beast (always open) (1 taken)

RULES

• Don't have animals that are not in the series
• you can only have 3 characters at first
• good characters are good and bad characters are bad, don't have a good rat or a bad mouse
• PLEASE no smileys

Accepted Characters:

Mintagerun the Ruthless/ Horde leader (Amarith Waterspring)
Amaranith/ slave going to Salamandastron (Amarith Waterspring)
Bryony/ Lady Badger (Cornflower MM)
Arya/ slave going to Salamandastron (Cornflower MM)
Jasmine/ slave going to Salamandastron (Lady Amber)
Cringe/ horde beast (Amarith Waterspring)
Sage Winthrop/ hare (Lady Amber)
Julian Taurisan Longears/ hare (Sparks of Southsward)
Vargha/ Horde slave (The Skarzs)
Skyle/ Slave going to Salamandastron (Wylder Treejumper)
Yirrit/ horde beast, spy for salamandastron (willruth)
Dawn/ horde slave ( Russa Nodrey )

PM any questions to me.

My Characters

Name: Mintagerun the Ruthless
Gender: Male
Species: Fox
Age: 34
Appearance: Wears faded purple cloak with a hood and black tunic.
Weapon: two curved swords
History (optional):
Rank: Salamandastron Horde Master
Personality: ruthless, wont stop to kill any whom he dislikes
Other: has a reputation for being ruthless ( hence the name ) and is feared by all

Name: Cringe
Gender: male
Species: rat
Age:24
Appearance: dark brown fur with a scar over his forehead
Weapon: sling
Rank: horde beast
Personality: evil
History (optional):
Other:

Name: Amaranith
Gender: Female
Species: Mouse
Appearance: Tan fur, blue tunic.
Age:14
Weapon: Sling
History(optional):
Rank: Slave going to Salamandastron
Personality: Always looks on the bright side
Other:

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[W0NWILL]

Well, I suggest that you don't tell the entire plot in the OOC post. Let the roleplayers find out for themselves. Roleplaying is a team effort; don't try to control it. The way you're telling it, you know exactly where you're gonna steer the story, and you'll be keeping it caged.

Basically; have your plan in mind, and create scenes that steer it along that path. But don't have every detail mapped out, leave room for 'exploring' the characters, the situation. Like free-range livestock. And keep your plan to yourself(its more fun that way!).

But that's just my two cents. You can do what you wish.

[Cornflower MM]

Sounds cool! I'll take the Badger Lady, and one of the slaves going to the mountian, if you don't mind.

Name:Bryony
Gender:Female
Species:Badger
Age:44
Appearance:Instead of white stripes, Bryony has dark grey ones. Other than that, her fur is typical badger. She wears a rough mountain brown tunic, belted at the waist with a sling made of shark's-skin. Sandals.
Weapon: The sling that she uses as a belt, and a mace without a chain.
Rank:Badger Lady of Salamandastron
Personality:Strict, but kind, stubborn. Bryony laughs easily, and is sweet, but also commanding.
History (optional):
Other:None at the moment.

Name:Arya
Gender:Female
Species: Squirrel, if that's OK
Age:24
Appearance:Brown squirrel with red tints in her fur, a very raggy tunic tied with rope at the waist. Very raggy boots.
Weapon: None, really. But a very good shot with a bow, and a swords-squirrel.
Rank:Slave, going to the mountain.
Personality:Sweet, kind, and determined. AScared out of her skin more than half the time, but doesn't show it, and always tries to help and encourage. Fierce and feisty, when she makes up her mind there's nothing stopping her.
History (optional):
Other: Been in slavery her whole life, longs to be free.

[Amarith Waterspring]

Both accepted!!  

[Unimaginative]

Dang it Dang it Dang it!!! I had a similar idea during school, but couldn't post it. I'll make my app later.

[Amarith Waterspring]

edit: never mind 

[Lady Amber]

Name: Jasmine
Gender: Female
Species: Mouse
Age: 15
Appearance: Brown fur, faded blue tunic
Weapon: Sling, dagger
Rank: Slave going to Salamandastron
Personality: Cheerful, but can get angry at times
History (optional): Got captured by the vermin when she was 7 seasons old
Other: None

[Jetthebinturong]

I'd just like you to know that even though I'm not joining this rp (mainly because the only character I have been using lately is a good cat which isn't allowed in this rp (I think I've become obsessed with him)) it has a really great storyline and I hope it lasts for ages.

[Amarith Waterspring]

Jasmine is accepted, Lady Amber.

[Amarith Waterspring]

This is my first RP so tell me if I'm doing anything wrong.
OK the plot is that there is an evil wandering horde master with a bunch of slaves he has gathered over the years. He has always watched Salamandaston and wanted it for himself. He knows that there isn't any firedragons in Salamandaston, but doesn't know want is in there. One day he sends a group of slaves to Salamandastron and sets up camp near it but out of sight so he can make sure that they don't run for it and not be seen. The slaves would come back with the Information and then he would attack Salamandaston many times. That's it.

Edit: Is that better WONWILL?

Edit: Please vote on what you think the title should be.

Sign up sheet:

Name:
Gender:
Species:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon:
Rank:
Personality:
History (optional):
Other:


Character Spaces:

Salamandastron Boy Fox horde leader ( 1 of 1 taken )
Slaves going to Salamandastron ( 3 of 5 taken)
Slaves with the horde (always open) (0 taken)
Badger lord/lady (1 of 1 taken)
Salamandastron Hare (always open) (0 taken)
Horde beast (always open) (0 taken)

RULES

• Don't have animals that are not in the serries
• you can only have 2 characters at first
• good characters are good and bad characters are bad, dont have a good rat or a bad mouse
• PLEASE no smilies

Accepted Characters:

Mintagerun the Ruthless/ Horde leader (Amarith Waterspring)
Amaranith/ slave going to Salamandastron (Amarith Waterspring)
Bryony/ Lady Badger (Cornflower MM)
Arya/ slave going to salamandastron (Cornflower MM)
Jasmine/ slave going to Salamandastron (Lady Amber)

PM any questions to me.

My Characters

Name: Mintagerun the Ruthless
Gender: Male
Species: Fox
Age: 34
Appearance: Wears faded purple cloak with a hood and black tunic.
Weapon: two curved swords
History (optional):
Rank: Salamandastron Horde Master
Personality: ruthless, wont stop to kill any whom he dislikes
Other: has a reputation for being ruthless( hence the name) and is feared by all


Name: Amaranith
Gender: Female
Species: Mouse
Appearance: Tan fur, blue tunic.
Age:14
Weapon: Sling
History(optional):
Rank: Slave going to Salamandastron
Personality: Always looks on the bright side
Other:

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sorry I clicked quote insted of modify...

[W0NWILL]

Yes, it is looking better. Thank you for taking my criticism so well, too. I may join, but I am currently part of a lot of RPs, so it's still pending.

[Amarith Waterspring]

Thats fine.   

[Cornflower MM]

So, when's the official thread gonna be out up, Ami?

[Amarith Waterspring]

Once I have enough characters I'll make the topic. We need Salamandastron hares, slaves with the horde, and horde beasts.

[Amarith Waterspring]

Sorry for the double post, but you can have 3 characters now but it has to be a type of creature that we need.