Crossed Swords Plotting: Swords of Freedom

[Dannflower Reguba]

Check that. Creepy

[Ceteruler]

I'm just gonna say, the posts I've seen so far are just what I've been hoping for! You guys are doing a really great job

oh, good good. This shouldn't be too hard then. that took me a distracted half hour to do.

[Icefire]

I'm just gonna say, the posts I've seen so far are just what I've been hoping for! You guys are doing a really great job

oh, good good. This shouldn't be too hard then. that took me a distracted half hour to do.

lol You, too? I'm not sure how long mine took, but it was at least half an hour. I think I changed the first paragraph four times. 
That said, I think this is what's going to make this the best tournament yet. We actually have to think about what we're writing rather than just reacting with a sentence here and there.

[Leatho Shellhound]

I posted, I know what you mean Icefire, I am painting more detailed pictures of whats going on around and on my character.

[Dannflower Reguba]

Uh, hey Leatho, you might want to edit a couple of words in your post. You spelled too with only one "o," and you spelled through "threw." Those are just the ones that I NOTICED.  Just wanted to let you know, we only get two judged posts, so just a couple of errors could get you in trouble. 

[Leatho Shellhound]

Uh, hey Leatho, you might want to edit a couple of words in your post. You spelled too with only one "o," and you spelled through "threw." Those are just the ones that I NOTICED.  Just wanted to let you know, we only get two judged posts, so just a couple of errors could get you in trouble. 

Thanks man!

[Dannflower Reguba]

Uh, hey Leatho, you might want to edit a couple of words in your post. You spelled too with only one "o," and you spelled through "threw." Those are just the ones that I NOTICED.  Just wanted to let you know, we only get two judged posts, so just a couple of errors could get you in trouble. 

Thanks man!

Welcome bud.  Just a heads up, if I notice something I will post it here, so you may want to check in every now and again. If I'm not sure about one, I might even go ask my sister about it (who's an even bigger grammar nazi than me!).

[Leatho Shellhound]

Uh, hey Leatho, you might want to edit a couple of words in your post. You spelled too with only one "o," and you spelled through "threw." Those are just the ones that I NOTICED.  Just wanted to let you know, we only get two judged posts, so just a couple of errors could get you in trouble. 

Thanks man!

Welcome bud.  Just a heads up, if I notice something I will post it here, so you may want to check in every now and again. If I'm not sure about one, I might even go ask my sister about it (who's an even bigger grammar nazi than me!).

Awesome, I alway check for new posts in all the Roleplay Tournament Board: Crossed Swords section.

[Icefire]

Hey, Leatho, I realized after I posted that my post could in a way be considered god-moding (I'm not really sure) since I dealt with the history of your character a lot. Please read it and tell me everything you want me to take out and I'll fix it. Sorry 'bout that.  

[Leatho Shellhound]

@Icefire, That's perfectly fine what you wrote! No worries, but thanks for asking.

[HeadInAnotherGalaxy]

Juzt vonderin, dae ve 'ave a picture o' ze zhip or zummat tae 'elp ken yer vay aboot ze zhip?

[Icefire]

Juzt vonderin, dae ve 'ave a picture o' ze zhip or zummat tae 'elp ken yer vay aboot ze zhip?

I think they were talking about something like that on the Crew's thread, I'm not sure though. I haven't been following it closely.

@Icefire, That's perfectly fine what you wrote! No worries, but thanks for asking.

Thank you! I'll think that factor through more carefully next time. Funny how I tend to overthink most details and then miss that one!

[BloodGullet]

Juzt vonderin, dae ve 'ave a picture o' ze zhip or zummat tae 'elp ken yer vay aboot ze zhip?

Ahoy! I did a quick google for images and found one I liked - of course it just gives an idea and I would like to see an one drawn by one of the great artists in our group - I can't draw my way out of a paper bag! - but I can find images on the web really good!  

anyway, here's something close to what I had in mind:


hope see something else that someone would draw, or we can use this, up to y'all  

p.s. - by the way this might need to be in the regular discussion thread, so I'll post it there, so hope no one complains about double posting, but others might want to see it also.

[Dannflor]

I just JOINED my name is Frost and I am a female snow white mouse

[Icefire]

I just JOINED my name is Frost and I am a female snow white mouse

Have you talked to Brookskimmer yet?